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Reviewer: freelke Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2009 6:36:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow, what a great story. Do you have this story completed on another site? If so I would LOVE to read it all the way through!please update again soon. I have not come accross a story as compelling as this in a long time :)

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 5:25:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Logan, Marie's over played naivety is sooo cruel, and no butterflies! Sob.
At least this time she conceded it was 'nice'. Good job on asking her to go off and think on them being together and work up them butterflies, ha ha.

I don't think she's going to be too happy about him going to finish himself off on some willing woman though. Can't wait to hear what she has to say about that!

Oh, and I loved your opening line..
"Yelped? The Wolverine did not yelp. But nonetheless, his voice was high and sharp." lol.

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 11:03:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

he won't, he'll want to but won't and in the shower it will be all Marie, but she she needs a clue by four in a big way. What did she and Andy do? Nothing but kiss???

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