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I really love this! The way you showed the progression of their relationship was really awesome and I loved the touches of humor and sweetness. Their relationship came across as very real and grounded. The pregnancy/miscarriage was handled really well. And even though it's a sad subject, I found it uplifting in the sense that you know that they'll be okay and that sometime down the road they'll have kids of their own when they're ready. I really liked how they talked about it and worked through it. This story was just so sweet and beautiful! I'm so glad I found it and thank you for writing it!
Well she's right, he really should wear his seatbelt xXx
Hey,
I'm on a review roll lol. I enjoyed this story so much...had everything I could want for them. I admit I have a little extra love for the Flight Night chap...besides how the progression of their relationship was described...what struck me was Marie's total surety about Logan...that he wouldn't look at another woman...of course it's inferred a lot in stories and I usually think of it as a given....but, it was extra nice that that's something that'll never be an issue for them.
I also liked how he was the one that kept on moving their relationship to the next level (ILY's etc)....the pleasure Marie takes in knowing that was sweet. Though I was surprised she lost the baby..they're just so together..you know they'll be all right. Thanks a lot for sharing.
Author's Response: I love reviews like this, because it makes me see things that I didn't even realize in my own story. Now I've got to go back and re-read. Thanks for shaking things up for me! I'm glad you enjoyed that one.rn
Very nice!! Really liked it!!
Good one ^-^