This story is wonderfully written and I love that you stay true to character. It’s exactly how I would expect Logan and Marie to handle the situation they find themselves in.

I especially liked this line from chapter three:

“I trust you,” I hear the words breathed into my hair, and I think those are the most profound, most loving, most respectful words this man could say to anyone.

So looking forward to more…

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try really hard to stay in character, to the point of running the dialogue through my head and hearing it in their voices, to see if it sounds real enough. Magneto's voice comes clearest for me, and I enjoy writing him, so I should do that more.... and also question my personal ethics while I'm at it.

None of your other chapters are reviewed so i thought id review them all for you because I'm a loser and your a good writer. xXx