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I really love this! The way you showed the progression of their relationship was really awesome and I loved the touches of humor and sweetness. Their relationship came across as very real and grounded. The pregnancy/miscarriage was handled really well. And even though it's a sad subject, I found it uplifting in the sense that you know that they'll be okay and that sometime down the road they'll have kids of their own when they're ready. I really liked how they talked about it and worked through it. This story was just so sweet and beautiful! I'm so glad I found it and thank you for writing it!
This story is beautiful. and your quote
"But those damned boots! Tooled leather silver sex!"
is just one that has stuck with me, Ive came back and read this entire story again just because I couldnt get it out of my head.
the miscarrage in your fic is a bit sad, but you pulled it off wonderfully. I applaud you for that.
Author's Response: I loved that boot line, too. I know a guy who wears boots like that and they are definitely eye-catching. Thanks!rn
This story is wonderfully written and I love that you stay true to character. It’s exactly how I would expect Logan and Marie to handle the situation they find themselves in.
I especially liked this line from chapter three:
“I trust you,” I hear the words breathed into my hair, and I think those are the most profound, most loving, most respectful words this man could say to anyone.
So looking forward to more…
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try really hard to stay in character, to the point of running the dialogue through my head and hearing it in their voices, to see if it sounds real enough. Magneto's voice comes clearest for me, and I enjoy writing him, so I should do that more.... and also question my personal ethics while I'm at it.
This story is really, really good and well written, and emotional, and captivating, etc There is only one problem - not enough of it. I am dying between chapters. Please update soon. Pretty please? With a naked Logan and a cherry on top?
Author's Response: At this time I'm considering this a finished piece, but thanks for the encouragement to proceed! I've got 2-3 other ideas for stories brewing, and I need to strike those while they're hot.
I'm on a review roll lol. I enjoyed this story so much...had everything I could want for them. I admit I have a little extra love for the Flight Night chap...besides how the progression of their relationship was described...what struck me was Marie's total surety about Logan...that he wouldn't look at another woman...of course it's inferred a lot in stories and I usually think of it as a given....but, it was extra nice that that's something that'll never be an issue for them.
I also liked how he was the one that kept on moving their relationship to the next level (ILY's etc)....the pleasure Marie takes in knowing that was sweet. Though I was surprised she lost the baby..they're just so together..you know they'll be all right. Thanks a lot for sharing.
Author's Response: I love reviews like this, because it makes me see things that I didn't even realize in my own story. Now I've got to go back and re-read. Thanks for shaking things up for me! I'm glad you enjoyed that one.rn