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Reviewer: Cherryblossom104 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 12:05:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

And the pot of stew thickens like a rue. BRILLIANT.

Reviewer: calemzoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 3:17:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

I don't mind a little J/L action. I actually do dislike them together, but I love when they mess things up for everybody. It's great angst/tension for Rogue and Scooter and even Prof X. I do hope Logan puts Jean to the wall, and not in a good way. Especially if she knew what was going on with Rogue and didn't call him. I can handle the b*tchy Jean, as long as she gets hers in the end. :) Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 10:28:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

thought it was a great chapter, and I'm so glad you put that little touch with Jean there thought it was perfect (yeah I'm a Jean hater). Hope you make Logan a little more than green (jealous) where Rogue is concerned. can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 8:03:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Just kill Jean of and you wont have to have some J/L pukage. xXx

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 2:23:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Why, oh why? He should be cocentrate on Rogue! But then again, a little spicing up dosen't hurt. As long as they end up together.

Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2009 11:47:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

NOOO! You don't gotta do it!

Why, why would you do that?! Perfect Princess Jean is a no good, lying, cheating, hoity toity yankee bitch! I am beging you - please don't do the J/L thing. Please say it ain't so!

How could he possibly consider Jean after she had his cell phone number and didn't call him to tell him about Rogue? And then the affair... it's not right....please reconsider.

Okay. That was my attempt at an impassioned plea. But the real question is did it work?

Oh, and just in case you are from up north....really sorry about the whole using the word "yankee" as an insult thing. I'm Southern - from Tennessee, and it just sort of slipped out. Sorry. Knee-jerk reaction ***Insert charmingly abashed smile intended to incite immediate forgiveness*** Plus it was totally aimed at the ho (Jean).

Logan's got to come to his scenses soon right. He'll see that R and S are only friends and that Jean's the real villian of the piece, right?

Okay, I'm calm - just tell me that the J/L thing'll be over quick. Still, it's gross. That's all I'm saying.

And will Rogue be able to forgive him for sleeping with Jean? Cause that's just gotta squeak her out too.

Oh, and good chapter btw. :D Forgot to mention that earlier. Oops.

Author's Response: Wow!!!! I knew some people weren't going to be too happy when I mentioned the whole J/L thing, but, wow. First, I take no offense at all to the whole "yankee" thing. I'm from Southern Nevada, myself, so I'm not even sure if that pertains to me. Would it??? ANYWAY. I know, I know. It makes me sick to just even think about it. I'm probably going to be losing my lunch the entire time I am trying to write it, but I think it will set up an intresting twist to the whole thing if I can get it right. It's still in the works, though. Who knows, I might end up scrapping the whole thing if I'm not happy with it. Thank's so much for the feed back on this chapter, though. I wasn't sure about it, but I want to get this story moving as quickly as possible.

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