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[Report This]Date: 02/09/2010 12:02:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
This made me do the Simpson's Mr. Burn's 'excellent' fingers. So much tension. this is increasing my interest.
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2009 5:26:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
More please xXx
Date: 03/13/2009 10:20:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! I like angst, but hate it when writers draw it out forever and ever. Keep it up, though. She shouldn't bow down to him. She's a different person completely after her time imprisoned. She shouldn't take any of his crap right now especially since he is jumping to conclusions about everything. 6 yrs may not be long for him, but he needs to realize she's not the same person, none of them are. I think you have kept Logan in character. I'd love to see an actual altercation, physically, between the two. That would get Logan realizing things have really changed (yeah it's been done before, but I always like when Rogue gets one up on Logan---stupid man). Hehe. Actions without words sometimes works the best. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: You know, I've been thinking the exact same thing! Maybe a sparring session or something.
Date: 03/13/2009 8:25:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh yes I thought that was the perfect chapter. I'm glad that your frawing it out a bit, I mean she's been through hell I'll be surprised if she can ever have a normal relationship ever, but I'm sure Wolverine can be very pursuasive. ;p Hope to read an update soon.
Date: 03/13/2009 6:04:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oooooh. Can't wait for him to find out what happend. And if Proffesor didn't try to find him...well, he deserves a punishment.
Date: 03/13/2009 1:58:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have to agree this was a great chapter, and there were some really great lines by Rogue in this to convey exactly how she feels about Logan's absence. Hope the next chapter is soon!
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2009 12:48:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow.
Now that was intense. Really good but seriously intense. :D Bravo! Encore.
I don't know if it's because the Rogue in this fic is older and literally been through the ringer or what, but the chemistry between R/L in this chapter is INCREDIBLE!! Again wow! I'm totally blown away.
I can't wait to see where you go after this. Logan'll find out soon about Jean being a cheatin' ho and Marie's captivity...will he come crawling? You know what they say, "a little humility is good for the soul." **insert evil grin**
.....And about Rogue and Scott, you're handling their friendship beautifuly. I'm looking forward to Logan and Scott meeting up. That should be interesting.....
All in all, I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that this is your best chapter yet. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! I was actually a little worried because I went a totally different way then what I usually do when Logan and Rogue fight. I usually like to hurry up and get them back together, but I do find that I am enjoying this. It might go on for a few chapters. Thanks again!