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Reviewer: Turante Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 12:16:48 AM Title: Of Summer Sun, Black Neoprene and Chewing Gum

I like it. It's fun, sexy, and has the beginnings of an interesting plot to boot. The constant Britishisms are a bit irritating, and occasionally outright confusing (knitting a jumper, sleeping in a vest, etc.), but that seems to be par for the course in this fandom so no biggie. I love Freddie the imaginary wolf, and am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked, especially Freddie :) Yes, I've had quite a few comments about the Britishisms, and have now found a beta for Chapter 15 onwards, so once I get up to date with all my updates, hopefully that will be resolved :) Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: AnnieHowlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 6:49:47 AM Title: Of Summer Sun, Black Neoprene and Chewing Gum

I knew it! I KNEW IT!!!!

Author's Response: LOL!

Reviewer: AnnieHowlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 9:17:32 AM Title: Of Summer Sun, Black Neoprene and Chewing Gum

I'm agreeing w/ miss vixen on this one: Freddie!!! That is so cute. The rest of the bunch seem totally weird and creepy though. Well maybe the little girl is okay, but can I be sure? She could be the creepiest of them all!!! o_O (In other words: still lovin' it!)

Author's Response: *grin* Thank you :) LOL! I'm glad you still like it...watch out for the little girl...*g*

Reviewer: AnnieHowlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2009 2:27:54 PM Title: Of Summer Sun, Black Neoprene and Chewing Gum

Professor Logan :P I'm so lovin' that idea... Brilliant story, I'm looking forward to part five!

Author's Response: Lol! Yeah...I just find the idea of him teaching hilarious :) Thanks, glad you liked it. Part 5 should be up later this evening! Hopefully...*g*

Reviewer: TRSummers Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2009 9:01:04 AM Title: Of Summer Sun, Black Neoprene and Chewing Gum

i keep getting flashes of Nacey's story as i read this one. it's all about the neoprene.

Author's Response: Damn it. I haven't read that...care to point me in the direction?

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 7:43:59 PM Title: Of Summer Sun, Black Neoprene and Chewing Gum

LOL. I love it! Can't wait for part two.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Part 2 should be along...uh...soon!

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