Ooh, this is just too fun!
I love the new annoying kid, and also how you kept Logan's reminiscings of Rogue relatively short.. almost ;-)

3 paragraphs on the 'warmth' factor was probably 1 too many as they did manage to snap me out of the scene with Star.
I would have left out this whole section "Constantly and more frequently then he would have liked .... as you can see drastic difference between the two. " which didn't add anything, whilst the following 2 paragraphs did fit in well with the scene.

I liked at the end how you kept Logan's summary of the Mystique / Kelly fiasco to a single paragraph, that worked well.

So much good stuff in this one, and lots of great lines..

“GOD! You’re so growly! It’s like driving with a god damned bear!”

“gee sorry I almost roasted you alive back there, hope that didn’t hurt, hey did you want a new shirt?”

"..he was defending his furry friends"

"..there was a slab of bullshit with a side of useless."

"..he was fresh out of stale beefy jerky. Of course he should have had some on hand, here he is driving around in Canada, it was only natural that he’d run into another mutant teen on the run, and of course it was almost inconceivable that he hadn’t thought to stock his pick up full of teenage girl goodies. "