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Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2009 9:10:45 AM Title: Deja Vu

Ooh, another story! but you haven't finished Wanted yet.. tut tut ;-)
I don't know how you can concentrate on multiple stories at once, don't all your ideas get jumbled up?

I like the start of this one, the deja-vu is awesome, really thought it was Rogue at the start, nicely done.
Liked the cocky new kid and her dialogue is really good fun.
Also nice to see Logan sending Rogue a postcard for a change!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2009 3:07:32 AM Title: Deja Vu

I must have read and reviewed this while you were posting it. The first time it came up with no paragraph spacing at all, and was virtually unreadable, so I left a review commenting on that. A friend checked and said the spacing was right, so I came back and yes - it's good now. Sorry for the confusion.

Author's Response: hehehe.... my bad, Sorry I was trying to play around with those < > code things- I can't figure out how to place something in italics and keep the rest of the story regular font- it's driving me bonkers. Sorry if I made the chapter hard to read, hope it's easier now.

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