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Reviewer: Moviemom44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 10:11:18 AM Title: Too Soon

Thank goodness their timing wasn't ALL bad! I loved this. --Wendie

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2009 4:44:59 AM Title: Too Soon

Fantastic story! Loved every angsty, hot, steamin' moment.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 9:04:50 PM Title: Too Soon

That was really good and engaging,
Very well written :)
Particularly the first half, you write a very good Logan and I was impressed at how you managed to weave in 'memories' without it getting dull.
Marie wasn't quite as good as Logan, perhaps because you wrote her in the 1st person, I'm not sure, perhaps just because your Logan was so good.

It dipped a bit from when Scott came in up to the point where Marie punched Logan; I can't say exactly why but it just seemed a little off, maybe OOC or maybe just rather rushed / forced, but then it picked up again after that.
Very cool :D

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