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Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2009 12:20:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

I can't wait to see what Logan decides to do for revenge...Probably not too happy that he had to remind Marie to uncuff him (or maybe happy, meant he was good ;)

That image of him waiting for her at the beginning of the chapter is well done, described just the way Logan would act.

Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks so much. i wish i had a barefooted logan waiting for me. It's not fair that Rogue gets to have all the fun!

Reviewer: ChildofLore Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2009 11:11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my....Wow...
That was great, I think I went blind for a moment from all the steam coming off my computer screen. Loved it! I definatly can't wait for more, especially at the thought of Scott and Logan meeting. Keep em coming and great job. To think this is your 1st Rogan story!

Author's Response: thanks, doll. scott and logan meet briefly in the next chapter. so that is to come soon!

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2009 10:31:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

Keep him cuffed lol. Good update!

Author's Response: haha! wouldn't that be great?

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 9:22:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh man that was fantastic and holy cow you have over 100 reviews.

I seriously don't think there's anyone on Wolverine and Rogue right now who doesn't know about this story, and if there is then they should really familiarize themselves with it because... its just that good! I loved this chapter and I LOVE that she showed up wearing a bathrobe lol it was great!

Author's Response: Amanda, you are too sweet to me. I don't know if everyone is reading this or not. My only hope is that anyone that *does* happen to read it also happens to enjoy it even a little. i'm such a nervous nelly when it comes to posting. I'm still so green that I don't know how certain chapters will be receieved until the reviews come in. I can't stress enough how much these reviews mean to me. But I'm building confidence now and even have plans for the next storyline.

rnThanks tremendously for all your wonderful feedback thus far! now go and finish writing a few more chapters of WYCF. :P

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 8:19:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

oh my very, very hot chapter. I really really do love the Rogan you've created in this fic., it's just awesome. I just love how Rogue is not a push over and takes charge. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the compliment! next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: thaty Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 5:13:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

Ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
That was hot!
You are evil!!! I want Logan to strip too!!!!

You really know how to make the story interesting, but I'm a little worried that you sad that There are only a few chapters left!!! O.O
Are you crazy??? I want a lot more...hahahaha

Just kidding! I know writing must be a really hard work. But thank God you are so good at it!

Can't wait for next chapter and next story!!!

Please, don't forget their double date with Bobby and Kitty! I'm waiting for it! And Logan and Scott meeting! And the party! Will there be any more drama in this?

Oh, don't worry about errors in the writing! I haven't seen none! Besides, the story is so good that we can't even notice than, even if we wanted too.

Sorry for writing too much!!! hahahaha
Oh, and sorry for my bad writing, english is not my first language!

Can't wait for next one!

Author's Response: i haven't forgotten! I'm about to toss a drama bomb into the storyline because really soon there will be the double date and Logan and Scott will meet and of course, the infamous party. So yeah, there's more rides to come.

thanks for the great feedback-- you can *never* write too much! And double thanks for teh sweet words about errors and typos. I know they're there. But as long as there aren't too many than hopefully they don't distract from the story too much. which sounds like the case here (fingers crossed).

thanks again! The next chapter should be up by monday!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 4:26:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

OooOooohhhhhh she's evil. I wish my man would indulge my inner stripper.

Author's Response: lol. maybe if you pulled out the peanut butter or chocolate sauce as incintive?

Reviewer: biohelixx Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2009 3:15:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Guh. Yummy! Now I can't wait to see what happens with Scott, her family, and hopefully find out what Raven really does :-)

Feed me please!
Melanie

Author's Response: hey, melanie! thanks for the feedback. i'll probably have the next chapter up and ready monday!

Reviewer: Raven Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 6:31:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Smut--well done. Playful and not boring.

Author's Response: thank you. :)

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 2:03:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Please PLEASE update soon cause I am falling in love with this story *sigh* you are amazing!!! This story really made me happy and after my day starting out like crap it now feels soooo good haha =D

Author's Response: glad to be of the kind of service that makes your day just a little less crappy! :) and thank you yet again for the great feedback. i'm working on the next chapter. ie: i know what i'm going to write i just have to stop being lazy and actually sit down and *write* it. sigh.

Reviewer: Rogue1189 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2009 1:51:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

AHHHHHH

Great now I'm so hot and bothered omg I think I almost screamed in agony! You my friend are good you wrote it so good I think every girl reading this will totally go find their boyfriends after to ravish them... now excuse me I must find mine *grins*

Author's Response: haha. thank you so much for the great feedback. and try not to be *too* rough with your boyfriend. ;)

Reviewer: thaty Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 9:19:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh God
This is getting better each chapter!
Please don't take long for next one!

Author's Response: hey you. i swear i have actual plans to write the next chapter. honestly. i just haven't fully gotten back into the rythem of writing again. but i'm trying. thanks so much for the feedback. feedback is truly the cattleprod to my butt that pushes me to write faster and post more often. ;)

Reviewer: hjsblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2009 6:56:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Absolutely without a doubt one of the best AU stories i have ever read (excuse my english, not my first language).I love the story and very coll sence of humor that just i can totaly relale even that i am not a computer bod.Please don,t make us wait too long for the next chapter! By the way, as i am not Jean's fan,but Jean-Warren parring is hilarious. I am enjoing it!

Author's Response: what a wonderful comment. thank you so much. i'm really glad that you're enjoying this fic. AU's tend to be love 'em or hate 'em stories, and i feel really excited and humbled that so many people are liking this one. thanks again and i promise to post the next chapter as soon as i can.

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 6:48:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

It's about time that Marie figured out her feelings for Logan. I hope that she tells him sometime, maybe even take him to Jean's party. That'd be fun.

I hope you feel better soon, I was excited to see a new chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: thanks so much for the review and for the well wishes. i'm feeling much better and have plans to write the next couple of chapters soon.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 5:24:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

More Please xXx

Author's Response: on the way. um. soon?

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 5:04:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

LoL
It was so funny, when I saw you updated I hastily pressed on reviews instead of the link and I read that review below this one and all I see is "Logan stripping" and literally I went from o.o to O.O in point two seconds and attacked my computer trying to get to chapter 16

I can't believe this story already has 60,000+ words- you're doing a great job! Miasma, by the way, great word usage, especially when you plug into the rest of the sentence- lust cloud- niceeeeee lol can't wait for chapter 17!

.... really... I can't....c'mon now

Author's Response: haha-- i can absolutely understand your rush for fic after reading that line in the review. i'm laughing just thinking about your comical reaction. :) and yeah, i can't believe this story already has that many words. did i ever have a life prior to writing this fic? the sad thing is this one isn't even finished yet and already i have more ideas for the next story...

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2009 4:16:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

:D Welcome back, I was wondering just an hour before you posted if you where feeling better. Think you just proved you are.

Logan stripping, damn I'm not gonna get that out my mind for the few days lol

Author's Response: :) first of all, thank you. i am feeling MUCH better despite the lingering tickle of a cough. and secondly, yeah. Logan stripping. I think we all can drool at that thought. woah, baby.

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2009 3:52:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

TR....I miss you....update....booo

::throws out random cupcakes:::

May the cake up cup land in your hand and inspire you to UPDATE!!!

Author's Response: aww. thanks for the note and thanks for the cupakes. your cakes must be magical because look at that-- you threw them my direction and a day later i updated. hmm. ;)

Reviewer: Amoraluv Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2009 6:09:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

finally, I thought marie was going to be a loser but her hormones have more comman sense then her so .... Yeah!!

Great story keep up the great work. Your smut was pretty good

Author's Response: thank you. :)

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2009 3:23:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

If this is your first attempt at smut, I'm a goner when you've had some practice.

*melt*

Author's Response: thanks. i guess you're saying you're not opposed to me practicing throughout the next couple of chapters, huh?

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 8:53:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great work on the steam, you have nothing to be nervous or embarassed about. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.

Author's Response: thank you. :)

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 3:26:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I finally had time to sit down and read the entire story and I have to admit, I am very impressed.

I also agree with what chiloflore wrote about the love scene. It was tasteful and classy, a lot of the love scenes that are written between those Rogue and Logan are WAY over done. Excellent job!

Have a nice break and I will look forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: thank you, erin. i'm glad you're enjoying this story so far and i appreciate your thoughts on ch.15. this is such a friendly, and supportive site. i'm having a blast writing here.

Reviewer: thaty Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 2:54:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow!!!
That was amazing!!!
Ok, ok, you can take your rest :o)
But please, don't take it too long!!!!

Author's Response: thank you for the green-light on my break. haha. and thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ChildofLore Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 2:38:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

Finally!!!!!!
I don't know what your talking about, your gifted. Are you sure you've never written any steam scenes before? Cause this one left me breathless. It was classy, in character, and HOT! I can't tell you how many times I've read a love scence that was too much like porn or not worth the time. Yours was beautiful and just enough without being too much. I truly love this story,hell I got myself an account just so I could review it. You have a charming way of writing and way of drawing things out to the point where even the reader is left waiting for that first kiss. Keep em' coming! I'm offically addictated

Author's Response: thank you so much for the great feedback. i'm really glad you said what you did because i think a big part of why i was nervous this chapter wouldn't have gone over well was because it wasn't as... dirty... as some of the other love scenes i've read. but i felt that if i even attempted to go that direction then it would feel out of place in this story considering how light i've tried to keep it. thanks again. I'm glad you opened up an account so that you could send me this review. :D

Reviewer: lovers_fade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 2:27:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

um. um. um.
more. please.
soon? five minutes ago?

Author's Response: there probably won't be anymore for a few days, at least. i'm sick and too crabby write now to properly care for these guys, but when i'm better i promise to update as soon as i can.

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