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Date: 03/18/2009 7:11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
When are you gonna post the next chapter?!
Author's Response: just posted it last night. better late than never, right?
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2009 1:08:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
NOOOOO! It was all going so good! I feel like curling up into a ball and wailing. I love and hate this chapter.
Poor Logan and Rogue,it was bound to happen, but still...Can't wait for the update, amazing work as usual.
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you. you're right-- it was bound to happen. it had to, right? Marie was just pulling far too many stunts for them not to come back and bite her in the rear. But who knows. Maybe she'll be able to work things out with the people in her life. :)
Date: 03/13/2009 8:14:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
I almost started crying near the end! I could really feel everyone's emotions in this chapter. You do a wonderful job of making the characters "real".
Great job!
If this was going to be turned into a movie, who can you picture playing Marie and Logan? They can't be Hugh Jackman or Anna Paquin..hehe
Author's Response: thanks the the complimenting review. as far as your question, though--- I have to say, they could definitely be played by Hugh and Anna. In fact, I have a proof thanks to another reader. And I'll share said proof when i post the next chapter. ;)
Date: 03/12/2009 8:29:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hey, just read it again.
And this caught my atention: “Bobby warned me not to trust you"
WOW!!!! What was that about? O.O
I can't wait for the rest of the story!!!!
Author's Response: lol. you don't miss a thing, do you? :P
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2009 6:11:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'll beta for you! Double bonus 4 me... and you get it all FREE!!!
lol - 'Tho I must admit... I was far too enthralled in the story to care about (or really even notice) any spelling mistakes. You're doing a great job all on your own... which is pretty hard when you're the one writing it.
I'm not sure I liked the ending of that... even tho it was inevitable. Very sad. But there's hope for the others yet... :D
Author's Response: i'll keep you in mind for a beta as well. i'll get in touch with you if i decide i need extra help.
it's great to hear that you're still enjoying the story! and even though i'm sure you're slightly fibbing about the typos (i've caught many after having already posted!), i thank you anyway.
the next chapter will be up soon. you know, in a few days. not, um, hours.
Date: 03/12/2009 1:43:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
*heavy sigh*
thank you for teary eyes at 6.30 in the morning, lol.
anyway this was epic(yeah it's so lame of me to use that word but i've only had one coffee yet, and your rogue knows what that means!)
the drama, the drama!! *gasp*
it was so brave of her to admit she'd planted the calls and stuff, but ooohhh it totally messed her and logan up...especially after what he's been through with that other girl...poor him. and poor her too... *heavy sigh numero deux*
lol @ the pookie/pukie thing though ^^ did you see 13 going on 30?
mhmm i want a peanut butter sandwich now. we don't even have peanut butter though. i don't even like it. lol.
have a good day =)
(and not another crappy evening, i don't think you or your readers could take that lol)
Author's Response: no, i have not seek 13 going on 300. I take it there was a reference to pukie/pookie?
i just left a review response to another person where i practically dittoed your PB sentiments. I swear I've got to get some PB soon!
and yeah, Marie knows how to mess up things really nicely for herself. I suppose now she has to figure out how to fix all of her mistakes. sigh. what's a girl to do?
Date: 03/11/2009 10:12:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
So sad... don't know how you're going to fix this mess.
Author's Response: you mean i have to fix it?? :P
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2009 9:53:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, that was a fab chapter!
Maybe you should go solo pity drinking more often ;-)
Really loved how Marie had to face up to all her sneakiness. I hope she has to do a lot of crawling before Logan takes her back.
I was really sad and *disappointed* in her ;-) that she hadn't made her mind up to ask Logan to the family dinner until she heard how successful he actually was. I don't know how you can have her make up for being so materialistic!
Author's Response: i have a definite love/hate relationship with this story. i'm not completely happy with how all the characterizations turned out, especially Marie. But i molded them all in one fashion and to change them into something else would leave my mind whirling too much. this is all still new to me and i'm not comfortable/practiced enough to do anything about it right now. and again, all of this is happening in the span of 2 weeks in the story. people just don't normally change over night. maybe i'll be able to redeem her by the end of the story, or maybe i won't. but i'm not going to stress about it because this is a light, cheezy fic. :)
Date: 03/11/2009 4:40:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oooh Harsh chapter. I think it's a good thing that they're getting everything out in the open though.
Author's Response: it was a long time in the coming. but things can only look up from here, right?
Date: 03/11/2009 2:04:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
First of all, sorry you had a bad night! Hope you are doing better now!
You know, I came here today just to look up for things and you had updated!!! Then I saw that it was a big chapter (more than 5,000 words!!) and that there would be some drama.
Wow! Gotta tell you: I love some angst!!! And I was missing it in this story!!! It was about time everyone find out! Amazingly, I was happy while reading it, because I love the characters to suffer before a happy ending...hahahahaha
It was my favorite chapter so far, I kept reading it slowly, enjoying every moment, afraid to get too soon to the end!
I loved the discussion with Jean, I feel just like her, always having to be the perfect one, the one that does everything right, that can't disapoint anyone!
You know, what makes your story so good, even for a no-powers one, is that it is very real, you kept the essence of the characters, and above all, because you are a really good writer. You know how to keep it interesting, and make us want more when a chapter is over! The story is very well developted, you don't forget characters, or situations, everything fits perfectly.
I'm really anxious about the next chapter (as always), although I'm having a bad feeling that this story will be over soon!
PS: I'm not gonna offer to be the beta because english is not my first language! Oh, I'm from Brazil and I just foud out a place that sells peanut butter *_* Now I need the boyfriend!!!
Author's Response: i am doing much better today! And I completely agree about the angst. I love a story with a good bit of dirt in it, but considering how I've tried to keep this one fairly light, I didn't feel like I could make it *too* angsty and still be able to get away with it.
thank you VERY much for the kind words about the story. i could honestly sit here and write about 2,000 words in response to all that you said but that would be just too much for you, i'm sure. ;) The next chapter should be out in the next couple of days. It got really busy for me recently but it should all slow down soon and give me time to put into the next chapter.
hooray for finding the peanut butter!! you know what? I don't even love it, to be honest. I like Reese's candies, but I probably only have a PB (and honey) sandwich about once a year. However, since writing some of these chapters I have been craving PB like you wouldn't believe! I've seriously got to go buy a jar soon before i explode. And yes, I need a boyfriend, too. let the manhunt begin!
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2009 1:59:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
nooooooooooooo.
well, whatever about Jean - I less than care.
but no, Logan! no! dangit.
please tell me you're not going to leave us hanging for like a week after this.
Author's Response: heh. okay. for the record-- i had NO intention of letting you guys hang like this for a week. But the last few days have been rather busy and I haven't even worked on the next chapter yet. But I will soon! Just keep the pitch forks at bay in the mean time, alright? :D
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2009 12:42:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
omg noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
how could you????????????????????????????
well I did expect him to find out I knew it would happen but that doesn't mean I have to accept it haha
Now he needs to listen and stop ranting she already admitted to it and it was all genuine and she loves him!!!!!!
ugh I have to go find a one shot fluff to calm me down haha
Author's Response: haha--- it all had to come out eventually! just think, all of this was like pulling a shard of glass out of your skin. once it's out the body can heal. We all know L and M will figure something out. Won't they? ;)
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2009 12:37:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'll do the beta thing! (and it has nothing to do with getting a sneak peek at the rest of your stories. LOL) I enjoy betaing. Now... on to the review.
I completly forgot about the phone thing. And even through poor Marie's inner turmoil, I couldn't stop grinning. Then, once I realized what this meant (about the same time Marie did mind you) I had to keep the tears in. I did a better job than her. But I was totally sad. THe with the whole Jean thing, I felt just like Marie again. I love Jean again turning the tide on Marie, and I've been there so many times with my younger siters. Great chapter, you've got me choping at the bit, waiting for more. Send me a PM if you're intrested.
Author's Response: hey! thanks for the beta offer. I will keep you in mind if/when (ha!) i do another story. I've gone solo this far, I might as well finish SoA by myself. ;) in regards to SoA--- you can't deny that Marie had it all coming in this one. she deserved to have her ass bitten a little (and not in the good way). haha.
Date: 03/11/2009 11:54:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Murphy's Law strikes just when everything seems to be going right: comes out that Marie tried to break up Bobby and Kitty, Logan finds out that Marie was using him (at least at first), and Jean goes off the deep end.
Marie should have just found a way to stay home, although everything would end up coming out anyway.
I don't know if I've mentioned it in previous reviews, but I love this take on an AU story. I've only read one other story on this site with no powers that I really enjoyed, so I was surprised to find another one. You still have all the characteristics that make the characters the characters, so the story works well.
Sorry to see that you had a bad evening, hope that things start going your way today. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: the last couple of days have gone much, much better. :) and thank you for the compliment on the story. what other AU story did you read that you liked? if i haven't read it before I'd like to. hope to have the next chapter out soon...