it's official: I'm addicted to your story =)
I'm on chapter 16 now...been reading on-stop since 2 days ago: before school, after school, at night, hell even in school haha. I just can't stop ^^

so, yeah, I just wanted to tell you how much I love this. (and that's it's very strange to be reading smut in the school library, especially when it's this good =P )

I love the M/L dynamic the way you write it; it's hot and romantic and everything, all at the same time.

*off to go to class and then to the gym to find hot boxing instructor to go out on a date with*

Author's Response: oh, yeah--- snagged another unsuspecting reader into my clutches! haha, j/k. Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback. I love reading a story all in one go and i know all about addiction. 9 years ago i was doing the same thing in school. You know, not learning. Just reading my fanfic. Jeeze, did I have my priorities in order or what? :P good luck on the hot boxing instructor hunt! Since starting this story, i've tried looking in my area. it ain't happening. haha.

I can't wait to see what Logan decides to do for revenge...Probably not too happy that he had to remind Marie to uncuff him (or maybe happy, meant he was good ;)

That image of him waiting for her at the beginning of the chapter is well done, described just the way Logan would act.

Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks so much. i wish i had a barefooted logan waiting for me. It's not fair that Rogue gets to have all the fun!

Keep him cuffed lol. Good update!

Author's Response: haha! wouldn't that be great?

Ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
That was hot!
You are evil!!! I want Logan to strip too!!!!

You really know how to make the story interesting, but I'm a little worried that you sad that There are only a few chapters left!!! O.O
Are you crazy??? I want a lot more...hahahaha

Just kidding! I know writing must be a really hard work. But thank God you are so good at it!

Can't wait for next chapter and next story!!!

Please, don't forget their double date with Bobby and Kitty! I'm waiting for it! And Logan and Scott meeting! And the party! Will there be any more drama in this?

Oh, don't worry about errors in the writing! I haven't seen none! Besides, the story is so good that we can't even notice than, even if we wanted too.

Sorry for writing too much!!! hahahaha
Oh, and sorry for my bad writing, english is not my first language!

Can't wait for next one!

Author's Response: i haven't forgotten! I'm about to toss a drama bomb into the storyline because really soon there will be the double date and Logan and Scott will meet and of course, the infamous party. So yeah, there's more rides to come.

thanks for the great feedback-- you can *never* write too much! And double thanks for teh sweet words about errors and typos. I know they're there. But as long as there aren't too many than hopefully they don't distract from the story too much. which sounds like the case here (fingers crossed).

thanks again! The next chapter should be up by monday!

Guh. Yummy! Now I can't wait to see what happens with Scott, her family, and hopefully find out what Raven really does :-)

Feed me please!
Melanie

Author's Response: hey, melanie! thanks for the feedback. i'll probably have the next chapter up and ready monday!