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Date: 03/25/2009 11:27:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
"Are you ready, Marie?" He whispered huskily.
oh my god, EVERYONE who's reading this is ready! AAAGGGHHH!
Author's Response: lol. are you even taking breaks between chapters? :P
Date: 03/06/2009 6:31:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Smut--well done. Playful and not boring.
Author's Response: thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/06/2009 1:51:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
AHHHHHH
Great now I'm so hot and bothered omg I think I almost screamed in agony! You my friend are good you wrote it so good I think every girl reading this will totally go find their boyfriends after to ravish them... now excuse me I must find mine *grins*
Author's Response: haha. thank you so much for the great feedback. and try not to be *too* rough with your boyfriend. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2009 6:09:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
finally, I thought marie was going to be a loser but her hormones have more comman sense then her so .... Yeah!!
Great story keep up the great work. Your smut was pretty good
Author's Response: thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2009 3:23:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
If this is your first attempt at smut, I'm a goner when you've had some practice.
*melt*
Author's Response: thanks. i guess you're saying you're not opposed to me practicing throughout the next couple of chapters, huh?
Date: 02/23/2009 8:53:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great work on the steam, you have nothing to be nervous or embarassed about. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Author's Response: thank you. :)
Date: 02/23/2009 2:54:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow!!!
That was amazing!!!
Ok, ok, you can take your rest :o)
But please, don't take it too long!!!!
Author's Response: thank you for the green-light on my break. haha. and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 2:38:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Finally!!!!!!
I don't know what your talking about, your gifted. Are you sure you've never written any steam scenes before? Cause this one left me breathless. It was classy, in character, and HOT! I can't tell you how many times I've read a love scence that was too much like porn or not worth the time. Yours was beautiful and just enough without being too much. I truly love this story,hell I got myself an account just so I could review it. You have a charming way of writing and way of drawing things out to the point where even the reader is left waiting for that first kiss. Keep em' coming! I'm offically addictated
Author's Response: thank you so much for the great feedback. i'm really glad you said what you did because i think a big part of why i was nervous this chapter wouldn't have gone over well was because it wasn't as... dirty... as some of the other love scenes i've read. but i felt that if i even attempted to go that direction then it would feel out of place in this story considering how light i've tried to keep it. thanks again. I'm glad you opened up an account so that you could send me this review. :D
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 2:27:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
um. um. um.
more. please.
soon? five minutes ago?
Author's Response: there probably won't be anymore for a few days, at least. i'm sick and too crabby write now to properly care for these guys, but when i'm better i promise to update as soon as i can.
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 2:11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
"I sighed happily and fell asleep, safe in his arms."
AHHHH!!! I don't even have another word for it!!!! Wonderful balance between intimacy and pure mushy love! Hey now I was using that paper bag to breath again but it wasn't cause of shock this time! Whew! That was just like HOT and seriously what girl wouldn't want to be sharing Logan's massive bed! I get the feeling MR. Logan has more money then we've been led to believe oh but I hope he doesn't find one of her lists or something and find out about her plot with Bobby-even if it is so obviously discarded now
Love this chapter, love your writing, have a nice hiatus and come back with a rocking chapter 16!
Here have some chocolate chip cookies with reeses pieces! you've earned em!
Author's Response: hey... reeses are my favorite chocolate candy! thanks for the review, amanda. i'm still nervous about the whole thing-- i don't feel like it came out quite right--- but maybe a lot of that has to do with the first time jitters. when i figure out what i'm doing for 16, i'll try not to disappoint you. :)
Date: 02/23/2009 12:05:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
You win a gold star...don't worry, it all turned out fine.
I'm glad you've gotten these chapters out as quick as you have...now go and take your well deserved break =)
Author's Response: thank you for the gold star. the last gold star i was ever given was in the first grade when i spelled 'uniform' correctly. and now i'm getting a gold star for writing smut. ha!
Date: 02/23/2009 11:57:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love this story, please keep going.
Author's Response: thanks, jen.
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2009 10:03:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
More please xXx
Author's Response: there will be more to come eventually.
Date: 02/23/2009 8:57:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
for the first time this was fantastic!!!!! I loved this chapter. Makes me wish Logan would come fall in love with me.
Author's Response: i think i could manage some logan lovin' over here as well...