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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 11:22:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

smoldering, smoking, pants on fire hot!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 3:09:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

WOW Okay yeah I'm sitting here plotting your destruction because you actually ended it there and I have this brown paper bag I'm breathing into but it isn't working! I almost fell off my chair and had a heart attack- yeah know when your REALLY into a story and you're just reading every word really carefully and then you keep scrolling down and suddenly there's no more DOWN cause you've reached the end of the story without even realizing it? And suddenly your breathing in and out of a paper bag b.c you're having a panic attacK? No...never had that happen? eh ?

But hey I'm so happy for you- 11 reviews just for this chapter-so far!- and you've written 54,000 some-odd words really congratulations it's a great story- you gotta be proud!

Now, I'm sorry but if there isn't an update by Monday at midnight I'm going to have to start plotting your demise-I can't believe you ended it there-obviously you're trying to kill me!

I do love you're Logan- his blunt revelation of his feelings for Marie could only be made believable by you and in this story- you created a really great Logan and I loved this whole chapter! The part where Logan licked her lip? I DID FALL OFF MY CHAIR! Seriously, that almost killed me but not as much as when the story ended like 10 lines later! UPDATE LADY

Author's Response: i loved writing this chapter. it is my favorite by far. i'm glad that you and everyone else seemed to enjoy it as well. and thanks for your kind words about Logan. you are too sweet. now then, put the paper bag down and check your inbox. i'm posting ch.15 asap. :D

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2009 12:14:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Lightbulb moments! -click- Those are fun. About time Marie figured out she was being a complete and total idiot trying to get Bobby back. I'm going to love reading the next chapter when it comes up.

Author's Response: haha, yeah, marie has been a bit slow in this story hasn't she? I mean, come on. There's Logan. And then there's Bobby. ..... is that really such a hard decision?? :P

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 7:07:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great Job! I can't wait until the next hapter. I'm hoping that there's lots of updates in my Inbox when I get back. *grins*

Author's Response: thank you! and nice subtlety, by the way. ;)

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 6:46:22 PM Title: Chapter 14

WOW! More please xXx

Author's Response: it's on the way soon. :D

Reviewer: lovers_fade Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 4:09:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh, you are evil. (but, then again, this is my own evil-author-in-a-different-fandom karma coming back to get me. oh, sweet irony.)
I have been waiting all day for this chapter and will be waiting all tomorrow for the next one. D:
but then again, this is fantastic and quality does in fact time. so... rush, but don't? I don't know. I'm rambling.

Author's Response: well, i finished writing and editing 15 today so yes, it will be posted tomorrow. but like i've told the others... after 15 is posted i am taking my long-talked-about break. no, really. i mean it. what? i'm serious this time.

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 3:07:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

EVIL!!!!!!!!!!! how can you just leave it like that, i mean....... please we need chapter 15.

I've been thinking (which is very bad in my case) that maybe Logan worked out what Marie was up to but trying to get Bobby jelous and thats why he wont kiss her, not until he knows she wants to be with him for him and not for Bobby.

also, what happen to pizza with scott and jean or is that still to come?????

Author's Response: you should know by now that i don't give anything away. ;) however, i'm humbled to hear that you're invested enough into the story that it makes you curious to know and figure out what happens next in their lives. :D

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 1:38:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh yes please take no breaks, this fic is just awesome, and luv your udpates. I can't tell you how much I enjoy reading this Logan. The chemistry is just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: no, no, the break is indeed coming (sorry!). but not until after the next chapter is posted. so you'll get one more (hopefully a good one) to tie you over for a while. :D

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 11:10:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

yay, that was hot!
I hope Bobby walks in on them on his way out and gets very jealous ;)

I object to them throwing around 'i love yous' so freely within 3 dates though.. especially Marie!

Can't wait for the next chapter...
please don't take a break from this story! ;)

Author's Response: okay, normally i would completely agree about the "I love you" thing. But keep in mind my intention for this story is meant to be light and fluffy. it took me about 10 chapters just to get them in the same room together... you can imagine how long it would have taken before i properly gave them time to 'date' before the Big Three words were shared. Also, i set up the time frame for the story from the get go. She has 2 weeks to accomplish her goals. Yes, that's silly but the whole concept behind this story is, too. So I don't feel too bad about the Big Three. If I ever do another story there will be no time frame-- espcially a 2 week one--- and i'll be able to focus more on the individual characters. But as this fic stands... well, it is what is it. And it's my first ever story so I'm learning as I go. THANK YOU for the feedback. It gives me a lot to think about and consider for future writing.

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 9:44:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: does that mean you like it? :P

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