oh my god, she is sooooo stupid! jump logan and tell him your love him, please, forget bobby right now now now! can you tell i am totally into this chapter by chapter?

god, this is great. loving it!

Author's Response: heh, yeah. this is pretty fun for me actually. all of these chapters seem so long ago that it's refreshing to read your reviews on them!

Oh, poor Logan!
She pushes and pushes and then shoves him away :( At least she's being honest though. Nicely done!

I hope he doesn't call her now and she hsa to call him if she's interested ;)

I don't think I liked the museum visit though. It works for the purpose of Logan showing Marie that he wants a soul mate and isn't just a sex bod, which seems to be what she currently sees him as, but it doesn't seem to fit.
Not because Logan can't be wordly as well as brawny, but because it seems that you're trying to give him a depth which will make him approvable to the parents. I would prefer it if if wasn't approvable but Marie loved him enough to tell her parents to stuff their requirements.. much more romantic ;)

Oh, and when did Logan and Marie first meet? We only saw him show up when she was breaking up with Bobby, but when did he first see her and know she was the one? and why did he think she felt it too.

ps: I like how Jean is so competent she can make Marie what she considers a complicated cup of coffee ;)

Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review. as for the museum thing--- that really wasn't my intention at all, but because i've tried to keep this story pretty airy, i can see how it's open to that interpretation. i wasn't trying to reflect any of marie's parental approvement requisites on the date. it was just logan sharing something of himself with her.

THATS WHERE YOU ENDED IT?!?!?!?

REMEMBER WHAT I SAID ABOUT NOT TRYING TO KILL PEOPLE?!?!

I'm going to go get meatballs and throw them at you! You just need to understand...you can't do that without warning a girl! Where's chapter 14-ahh!

Okay I'm breathing in and out breathing, I'm okay, everythings going to be fine ::whoooooo::

Okay, favorite lines in this chapter: I wanted to be her. Limp, on a bed, with perky nipples.

Other than that, again I LOVE your Logan I WORSHIP him-oh would you happen to know the name of the Chagall painting they saw? I'd love to see- your description really made inspires curiosity in the reader-hehe

Author's Response: thanks again for the feedback. i'll probably post 14 tomorrow. i don't want to post it any sooner because then i'll feel obligated to start the next chapter this weekend and, well, i need a break. even if it is only one day. haha.rnrnas for the painting, it is by Marc Chagall and it is titled: "Traum der Liebenden". which, loosely translated, means 'dream of the loving'. to be honest, i'm not a huge fan of Chagall's work but this painting strikes a cord with me and tugs at my heart strings. it's beautiful. everything around them--- the swirls, the bridge, the clouds, the tree, the flowers--- if you look close you can see countless images of faces and couples intermingled. Sigh.