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Reviewer: Corinne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 11:05:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

seski! drool, pant, yummm!

p.s. the mental image of logan in a bumper car was priceless! this is FANTASTIC writing!

Author's Response: thanks. i don't think anyone's ever put him in a bumper car before?

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 1:31:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

I"m glad she's finally come to her senses about the Bobby mess. That was driving me really really crazy. *grins* Great job so far!

Author's Response: thanks for feedback. :D

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2009 9:25:15 AM Title: Chapter 12

He he, that was a hot date!
I love the dialogue, it's brilliantly dragged out verbal foreplay :)
and I love Logan holding out on her..
I hope he doesn't kiss her until he gets himself invited to meet her parents! ha ha, *evil laugh* either that or she has to give in and kiss him first.

Oh, and Scott is so likeable in this, he makes me laugh.

Author's Response: thanks. :D

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2009 1:05:20 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow... hot hot hot. I'm dying for this kiss to happen!! I can't believe how much I'm enjoying your fic - AU without powers is not my cup of tea (at least it wasn't before), but I'm dying to read more! Hope you update again soon.

Author's Response: seriously, you all are about as obsessed with this kiss as Marie is. lol. i'm flattered that you've made SoA an exception to your usual dislike of AU fics. i hope you not only continue reading but that you enjoy the rest of the chapters-to-come as well.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 4:27:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

ohh, this just keeps getting better and better. I love Logan's resistance but dang how can he resist her. LOL Hope we get some kissage next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks for the complimenting feedback--- but i'm not hinting in either direction whether or not there'll be kisses going on in the next chapter. you'll just have to be surprised. :)

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 11:21:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

oh man I luv the interaction between Scott and Marie, it's just perfect. "Do I need to be close to a phone in case they only allow you one call?" what a classic line. I luv that Scott knows her so well.

I just luv the Logan in this so intense and sweet at the same time, it's the perfect balance. more, please.

Author's Response: thank you so much. more is on the way. you all should know by now that i can't seem to stop myself from pushing out a chapter a day. sigh. whatever happened to my real life?

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 8:49:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

Argh! Why is he waiting to kiss her?! I'm dieing for a good Logan/Marie Kiss!

Author's Response: :)

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