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Date: 03/25/2009 10:47:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
"Warren did a white man’s bop with his head." oh my god, i can totally see him doing that! i laughed so hard!
Author's Response: glad you liked it. :)
Date: 02/20/2009 8:53:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man! At 9am I checked my mail as I was gettin ready for my Botany class-from HELL and I saw you updated but I was rushing so I couldn't read it but now I just did, yeah!
Magical meatballs work! A boulder needs to fall off a cliff and hit bobby on the head and MARIE AND LOGAN NEED TO KISS DAMIT! OMG-Yeah that whole parking lot scene- so frustrating! I would have jumped the man by now!
Author's Response: sorry you had to suffer through Botany before you could indulge in some quality fic time, :( but i'm glad you enjoyed it. now, stop wishing death upon poor Bobby and make me some more meatballs. i need more brain power before i can properly connect Logan's lips to Marie's...
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 11:40:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
ah!!!! !!!!
Okay this review is for chapter 10 & 11- don't beat yourself up about 10 so much it was informative, I'm computer savvy myself and hey I've seen the inside of a few strangers e-mails ; ) yea the dork who couldn't figure out the < > codes, but I never knew that tid bit about the bluetooth thing- but I'd heard about it- thats interesting.
Also, you have an explosive vocabulary, you throw in these really sophisticated words and it really spices things up descriptively speaking. Such as:
saccharine, and sequestered, and inquisitiveness. Those are some of my favorites from Chp.10 but I equally enjoyed chapter 11 and pseudo, perusals
and rakishly-F.Y.I Logan grinning rakishly down at Marie- yeah just send someone with a mop to come clean me up b.c I was a puddle on the floor
Awesome-ness achieved and seriously I don't want to see Logan get hurt if he finds out Marie's plan- too bad so sad sorta deal- I LOVE THIS LOGAN usually I throw people cookies or cakes but I'm going to throw you a meat ball because it's brain food!
So take your hunk of meat and my praises and go! GO write another chapter!!!
Author's Response: 1) I don't know if i got the Bluetooth thing completely right--- i've never done anything like that myself (honestly) but i think i wrote it pretty close to correct from what i've read online. 2) thanks for all the compliments and the hunk of meat. haha. i would have preferred a hunk of Logan.... but yeah, i'll take what i can get. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 10:19:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, this is really good :)
This chapter was really fun and very hot! Logan being all over her yet not jumping her bones at her offer was great. You've got us wanting more too!
I'm glad he didn't take offence when Jean said Bobby was the kind of guy their parents would approve, but I hope he picked up on it and realises he's got his work cut out for him ;)
Oh, and the first 6 chapters despite being fun were torturous due to the minimal Logan appearances.. I'm so glad I found this story at this stage where I get to enjoy the fruits of patience without the wait, hee hee ;)
Warren is hilarious, but such a letch!
I wonder if Scott and Jean have met yet or if they will spark when they do..?
What else? Oh yeah, I hope the story will tell us why Logan was attracted to Marie from just seeing her with Bobby.. since he couldn't have known she'd be anything special at the time. It's intriguing, since we're told he's so hot and all the women are interested, what made her stand out to him?
Author's Response: oh good, you caught all sorts of little things i threw out there. ;) and you have so many good questions---- but i don't want to give anything away just yet
Date: 02/19/2009 9:38:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aw, I can't believe you didn't like the way this chapter turned out. It was hilarious.
Author's Response: thanks. :^)
Date: 02/19/2009 8:10:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow what a hot chapter I really like the hole car scene, I think I've read that part at least 4 times already. I'm always checking for updates. Luv the story line and I hope that Marie, takes her head out of her ass and forgets all about bobby before Logan loses interest. Can't wait to read about what they are doing in the afternoon. ;)
Author's Response: thank you for the response and i'm honored you like it enough to read parts of it more than once. :D the next chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow. keep your eyes open for it!
Date: 02/19/2009 4:57:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love how Logan and Marie are. I do wish she would give up her plan though. Jean getting drunk was hysterical. Love that Warren was 'charmed' by Jean. LOL Update soon!!!
Author's Response: i think you'll like the next chapter. Marie finally begins to change her mind about things.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 2:42:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
OOOOOOO she has to tell her perents she dumped Bobby, I mean come on let her bring Logan home instead.
I dont know why but the relationship between Marie and Jean sounds just like me and my older sister, right down to the partents thinking shes better lol.
Cant wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: i don't know whether i should be glad or sympathetic that you can relate to something going on in this story. haha.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2009 1:21:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my god! Warren is such a man slut and who knew Jean had that in her. I like how Rogue and Logan are getting it on.
Author's Response: i'm having fun playing with Logan and Rogue for sure. Things may get more interesting from here on...