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Reviewer: manda-dee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2009 12:23:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

Okay-back!!!

I don't even mind the lack of Logan/Marie...see look...this is me not minding- barely mentioning it at all....not like I'm DYING.For.More or anything......

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LoL I do enjoy a good explaining chapter-I hope Jean ends up with Warren they deserve each other. Oh he is so totally gross by the way-pushy guys = the worse

The Toes thing with the "their like little candies" O.O...no no sorry Bobby can go be homosexual with a severed foot in a closet somewhere-far from Rogue.

Oh, by the way, I left it out of my last chapter but when I re-read chapter 8- ya know withdrawal can be a real bitch sometimes hehe*- I was mega impressed with your Logan- very real and down to earth, a great example of what Logan would be like without all the feral animal growly-ness with the extra baggage of no memories and the unknown age and the nightmares filled with metal and needles and doctors oh my- he seems real, and again HE DRIVES A MUSTANG- but really he does seem like A+, gold star, extremely 100% authentic Logan- you definitely hit the nail on the head.

Okay, think I said everything I wanted to say, I'm just gonna wrap it up now. can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Craving it like a heroin addict who ran out of needles ;)

Author's Response: thanks for the detailed feedback. im actually really glad that you said what you did about Logan because that was exactly what i was going for. :D

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 11:59:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

ahhh!!!! You updated!! I haven't even read it yet but I'm so excited I had to come say YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!! BRB!

Reviewer: Wytchling Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 7:31:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Man her parents need to get a clue. And she needs to learn to accept herself for who she is without being weighed down by her parents judgements.

Sorry. My folks are the same way and I spent years trying to please them before giving it up and just pleasing myself.

Author's Response: my parents are the same way. AND i have an older sister. so i guess you could say i'm poorly taking out some of my frustrations on the characters in my fic. ;)

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