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Reviewer: Corinne Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 10:26:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

yay sexy fight scene coming up i hope!

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: manda-dee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 12:14:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

OK- I just got around to reading this chapter because of scheduling conflicts and partially due to my six hours a week of Botany-and I'm a business major- I.hate.college. Rapidly Digressing-I'd like to tell you that I don't think its very nice when one person tries to kill another person. For example, cutting of the chapter at the place wher you left it- not very nice, good example of me trying not to die of shock and grief.

I'm mean seriously I've been anxiously waiting for more Logan and Marie and that little bit of talk goin on at the hockey game was a nice tie-over but OMG!! The bar scene was so0o0o0o sweet! I was all melty and happy and envious! But then when he put his hand over her's and said "go out with me again" oh my gawd! PLUS THE MAN DRIVES A MUSTANG!!!!! AH!!!

This is a great story and I just think if you don't want me dead you should continue it before I cry. Like really now, c'mon! Please thank you and....hurry!

Author's Response: haha, okay, that was a damn fun response! and no, i don't want you dead or crying so i promise to start writing the next chapter with a renewed sense of purpose. :) chapter 9 should be up and ready soon.

Reviewer: jessness Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 11:52:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

Logan and Marie are so cute!

I hope Marie finally realizes how perfect they are together and give up on her Bobby quest.

Great job and please update soon :]

Author's Response: thanks for the wondeful feedback, jess!

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 11:34:36 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yay! More Logan and Marie goodness! I love the way you wrote the interaction between these two.

Author's Response: you're very sweet. :D

Reviewer: rhiannon_avon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 11:14:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love your story so far...I'm waiting for Marie to realize that she's missing a good thing to try and make it through this scheme of hers. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you. i'm working on the next chapter now. i'm glad you like the story.

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