Scott's a dick... and a Whore. xXx

I would definately like to see this one continued.

Author's Response: It will be soon hopefully, I'm just waiting for my beta to get back to me with the next two chapters! Shaz.

cant wait for next chapter

“She packs a punch dude, a scary, dangerous-I didn’t know you could go down like that-punch!” – love that line.

“I may have to set the record straight with her later, make sure she realises he’s a complete dick.” – hahaha!

P.S. I agree that London is over-priced and cold, but boring it most certainly is not! ;-)

This chapter was superb. I absolutely love your description of Logan in the cage (phew, has the temperature gone up in here?!) and I adore your incorporation of the X1 lines.

Also, great line: “Perfect polished skin, untouched, unmarked, dancing almost silently and always alone. I should have been more careful what I wished for.”

I'm hoping to finish the rest of this story this evening, life permitting...

well, this one was definitely rushed. The bedroom scene needs a LOT of work -- very awkward, those jumps in mood -- and the resolution of their little conflict was entirely too pat.

The jubi/marie convo also was not quite right.

Author's Response: Hiya thanks for the fb. Although I have to say it wasn't rushed (check the dates between updates). I'm trying to portray a couple who have trust, loneliness and self esteem issues, among other things, lol. Most people I know with these particular problems have quick flash moods, they jump between them, they are easily convinced about something or someone and then easily jump right back in doubt. This couple is surrounded by doubt, Marie desperately wants to be trusted and to fit in quietly; Logan desperately wants to find someone he can trust, but the self hatred and military in him (and Scott) keeps bringing up all the bad possibilities that he simply can’t ignore. Hope this gives a better perspective on the chapter. As for Jubes/Marie, it’s not quite right because it’s awkward, it’s meant to not be quit right. Much Love. Smjl47.

nice little bit of choreography in the stables, there :)

ack! be still, my beating heart! ;) what a precious scene!

Aww come on Wolvie don't listen to Scooter.

I really hate to say it, but it's been so long between updates that I've kinda lost the plot. But good news is, this chapter was almost a stand-alone and very good, I just love Logan being tender.

Author's Response: SORRY!!!!!! LOL, it's been really hard to get the right mood on it, so it took me longer. But hang in there!!

Scott suffer in the upcoming chapters? Please?

Yeah, an update! Thank you! Geez, Scott-- what a jerk. What's Jubilee see in him? I mean, seriously, what a blind spot. It's nice to have a good-Jean. I like evil-Jean as much as the next fan, but I also like variety. Good writing of Logan's point of view! And please, update soon!

me needs moar chapters!