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Reviewer: lisabll Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 9:18:33 PM Title: The Saddest Revelation

This is great very touching. I'll have to add to the request for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really excited about the reaction it's getting. I'll be working on the next part this afternoon!

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2009 5:58:50 PM Title: The Saddest Revelation

Beautiful. Next please.

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you liked!

Reviewer: Sparrow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 4:24:04 PM Title: The Saddest Revelation

Good stuff.

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 4:17:09 PM Title: The Saddest Revelation

More I need more!

Author's Response: I'm gonna have Corpal Tunnel if I keep up with all these demands. *grins* Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 4:07:14 PM Title: Space Hurts

Logan you gotta find Marie.

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 1:29:49 AM Title: Space Hurts

Fast update! I hope you're working on the next part. I'd like to see what Logan has to say.

Author's Response: I've been writing each chapter every morning, they're only a few thousdand words, so I can usually knock it out in a few hours. ALthough a two hour period of writing only usually has about 45 minutes of actual writing time. kids and all. *grins* Logan's getting ever closer.

Reviewer: Empress Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 1:10:22 AM Title: Last Call

All right. I'm good and addicted now; squirmin' on the hook too. I love your writing style. Guess that means I'm gonna have to go back and find your other WIP and catch up on that one too, huh? Glad to see you're going to continue this one though! Excellent job!

Author's Response: I love having people that way, fiending. It's good for the constitution. Thanks so much for your review! I think all the feedback is what's getting me writing on this one, although I plan to write on Futures later too. I think the slightly shorter chapters are getting people to read. People see my 6,000-4,000 word monster chapters and say 'I'll come back and read later!'

Reviewer: jessness Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 9:59:19 PM Title: Last Call

I love it! Please post the next chapter soon.

I really like the idea of Marie running away after she has had enough of Logan's behavior. I'm glad that he is looking for her but I hope it's for the right reasons...

Nice work!

Author's Response: In the beginning she ran because she didn't want to hear him say that he couldn't be with her. Now she's running for fear of the confrontation. I like to think that although Logan didn't act or react properly to any given situation in X3, he did react. I think it was easier for Logan to drink himself into a stupor than it was for him to deal. Just like I think it was easier for marie to run from him and her own weakness than it was for her to deal. *grins*

Reviewer: Sparrow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 6:58:51 PM Title: Space Hurts

Interesting...more.

Author's Response: There's definately more to come! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: QueenC86 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 6:46:22 PM Title: Space Hurts

need more, please, i need more

Author's Response: I've got to work on my other WIP tonight, but there will be more soon.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 5:41:50 PM Title: Space Hurts

OK, ok...we've got the crinkle of the damn picture......let's see it fer cryin' out loud!!!!

(btw..I am such a huge RF fan!!! tickled to find out they influenced what is becoming a fav story!!)

Author's Response: I really like country music, and tend to listen to it while I write. This particular plot line was created the first time I hear Last Call, and then influenced further by each song I commented in the end. Don't worry about that crinkle, it'll be back.

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 2:18:01 PM Title: Last Call

This is definately worth continuing. Great work so far. I always like it when Logan has to face up to the fact that he screwed up.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on it now.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 8:55:49 AM Title: Last Call

The picture didn't look right, he left his coat, Marie took the coat with her.........you HAVE to continue this so we can find out that he's started to draw HER instead of Jean!!!!!

(that is where that plot line was going, wasn't it???)

Author's Response: Very perceptive. But there's some stuff that even you can't see coming.

Reviewer: Kelara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 8:09:37 AM Title: Last Call

I'm going with the other reviews: Very powerful so far, with a lot of potential. So please do continue :o).

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad everyone is loving and wanting more of this! I hope more people jump onto the bandwagon!

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 7:38:31 AM Title: Last Call

Yes, this was great and sad and absolutely needs to be continued (please)!

Author's Response: Well, if everyone insists!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 4:30:16 AM Title: Last Call

Nonononono this is not finished, this can't be finished!

Sequel pweeeeeeeease.

Author's Response: You sound like my beta, Meg. LOL She tells me I have to write now...

Reviewer: DitzyMariposa Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 1:59:55 AM Title: Last Call

Wow. This was very good. Please write a second part.

Author's Response: All this overwhelming support and pleads for more is really going to my head. Thanks for the review it's doing a lot to boost my muses!

Reviewer: thatcraftykid Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 1:45:11 AM Title: Last Call

Logan was up and drinking coffee at my kitchen table when I crawled out of bed. Neither of us spoke. It was awkward and clumsy and I wanted to get everything out in the open, so he could make some kinda off hand remark and everything would be ok again and we could pretend we were just friends and hadn’t crossed into forbidden territory last night. I absently wondered if he smelt the shame rolling off of me. I wondered what our mixed scent smelled like, and felt a twinge of pain in my heart at the thought.

This is especially heartbreaking, and I love it.

Please do continue! :)

Author's Response: I wanted to make it so angsty that people hated and love me att he same time. I find that part very poignant, I'm glad I got my point across. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 1:34:03 AM Title: Last Call

Please do continue - this is powerful stuff!

Author's Response: Looks like the due to popular demand I'll be writing a second part, maybe a thinrd. I wanted to anyway. *grins* Thanks for the review!

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