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[Report This]Date: 01/06/2010 1:17:48 PM Title: Homecoming
I *hate* Emma with all my soul. She´s a stupid bitch, but I´m laughing my pajamas covered ass with the PVC thing. (Ok, this is in the next chapter…)
Well, this will be my first no-100%-hearts-flying review, but it´s not something bad. I´m only thinking about some things, you know… In the beginning, the fanfic was so angst and I understand that they need to progress and change and discover what they want and what to do to have it, but… I´m feeling like if this Logan isn’t the same of the beginning. I love the “fluff” and the fact that he´s there calming/loving her but I miss some little-moment when the fear/guilt is eating him alive. You know, looking at how he was with the Jean thing, and with Marie now in some type of possible danger or hurting, I´m expecting a Logan waking up in the middle of the night because he needs to see Marie sleeping (making sure that she´s ok) or late in the night thinking about everything. That type of moments that are totally-angsty-Logan.I think that when you are the type of person that have been touching the bottom of live because the guilty or the sadness, you *have* some moments when you can´t stop the need to drown yourself in that darkness. Maybe this is only my silly thinking, but I wanted to say it. *blush* I can´t believe that I´m saying you that I want them to suffer more… O__o
Marie impresses me. I like that she´s pissed off, tired and shows it. It´s like “I´m pregnant and I´ll not allow you to piss me off more! So shut the fuck up!” but at the same time she´s trying to be nice with the people who is good.
Author's Response: I get what you're saying, but this is all from Marie's POV. So we don't know what's going through Logan's head. Here's a tip though. After Marie's little explosion, he's being everything that he thinks she wants. Which is great and all, but eventually she'll blow up again. *grin*
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2009 10:35:14 PM Title: Homecoming
more more more more more!!!!
Author's Response: I've got another one in the works! Don't worry.
Date: 05/31/2009 7:48:48 PM Title: Homecoming
MORE! MORE! MORE!!!! uh...yup, that's about all I'm thinking at the moment!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm really glad you're enjoying this story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2009 11:18:33 AM Title: Homecoming
great chapter. i look forward to the next chapters. I wonder how it will work out!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you're enjoying everything so far!
Date: 05/31/2009 3:28:41 AM Title: Homecoming
Awwww...
Author's Response: yeah... *gushes*