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[Report This]Date: 01/06/2010 1:45:09 PM Title: Piles of Worries
Well… this will be the review of the quotes because there are sooo much phrases that I *must* to quote. You´ve my heart making triple-axels and double-mortals all the time.
(“I breathed him in like the elixir of life and it calmed me a little bit”) beautiful, simply.
(“You don’t do that, not with me,” he said pulling my face to his neck. He pulled off my coat, hoodie and gloves while I cried into his neck.) I hate you!! Because I read things like this, so cute, so sweet even when they´re simple and I go to my project-of-boyfriend and look at him like “¬¬ you´re not the Logan of the Rogan fanfics.”
(“I can hear your heartbeat.” There was awe in my voice when I spoke. I could feel him smile into my hair.) I *love* how you can write something normal like this and made me fall totally in love. I prefer when a normal phrase in a special context made my heart jump, than a fluff phrase with a lot of fluffy words.
You must be tired of me telling all the time “I love that” and “I like this” but it is what I feel. Even if it is the second time that I´ve read this fanfic, I´m so excited. Well, I´ve read it long time ago (*cough*I-want-more-soon*cough*) so I´ve forget a lot of things. It´s like reading it for the first time, except the fact that I remember half of the things that will be happening.
I´ve always liked a lot when they go to Logan´s cabin. Even if it is for a little time, the fact that they´re together and alone out there is so romantic. Who in her right mind will not want to be alone with Logan in a one-room cabin? For all I care he can take a shower in my living room, wake up in my kitchen-bedroom-everything-in-one and even cut his toenails in my carpet.
Author's Response: LOL. Wouldn't we all want Logan showering in the living room o.O.
I tried my best o convey the wide range of emotions that Rogue is having in this fic. She's just a jumbled box of shit at this point. She scared an confused and awed. And she's still dealing with the fact that he's here.
Leave your poor boyfriend alone. It's not his fault.
Date: 02/06/2009 2:02:18 AM Title: Piles of Worries
ahhhhhhhh!!! I cannot believe! CANNOT BELIEVE that you were surprised about receiving feedback for this story I mean its actually jut excellent!
Okay, the nitty gritty. Your Rogue is very damaged, not a little but a lot I mean the girl breaks down sobbing like every five minutes, but I do suppose that is the nature of Rogue.
I love the duality between these two characters, I love their heart ache and the cat and mouse game and I seriously love the last line of this chapter- great great ending right there. NOw as per instructions you simply will have to continue this or I will need to find and eliminate you ....well actually that doesn't guarantee me a chapter 5 so I shall find you and....force you into writing~ mwahahaha!!!
Seriously great works cookies and bean dip all round
Author's Response: Awww... Thanks for you kind words. *blushes* I tend to be very insecure about my writing. rnrnMarie really has some issues. She's working through what she has now, and there's a lot more to come. rnrnI'm trying to give everyone a view into each of their minds. I don't want to jump over into Logan's POV, although it's very tempting. Maybe after I finish this. Don't worry, I'm continuing, as soon as I write a chapter of Futures Unknown and get it posted. Hey, maybe you should head over there and tell me how you like it!rnrnThanks again for the review, I accept the cookies and bean dip (what a combo) and you won't need to kill me or force me to write, unless you want to come and babysit and clean the house so I can write. LOL :D
Date: 02/04/2009 4:09:10 AM Title: Piles of Worries
Everytime I read cabin I start thinking cabin of love... I can't help it ;)
Author's Response: *LOL* My beta and I have this running gag about the 'Love Shack'. I think that terri spoiled any and all cabins for everyone with her 'Love Cabin'. Regardelss, intresting things will definately happen at the cabin.
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 5:10:31 PM Title: Piles of Worries
ooh, getting exciting again!
liked the scene where she tried to cover herself up and flinched from his touch and he said “You don’t do that, not with me,”
and great twist with her now being on a mutant register book due to having gone and taken the cure.
still think she's pregnant, but now doubt her power will return, since it makes their lives rather difficult, but rather think that she's getting the enhanced Wolvie powers thanks to the baby she's carrying.
Author's Response: Everyone thinks I can't add more angst... Hmmmm. LOL I'm glad you're liking the new turn of events, but not everything's candy and sweets all the time! Thaks for reviewing so much, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2009 8:14:19 AM Title: Piles of Worries
More please xXx
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on it!
Date: 02/02/2009 7:51:36 AM Title: Piles of Worries
I'm thinking he's mostly worried about Marie, but with everything they still have to discuss it's understandable that she's reading more into his worry than is necessary.
Keep it coming, askita, I love this!
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad. I've got this whole.. 'I love this story and really want to write it, but I'm scared to death everyone will hate it' complex going. He's definately worried about Marie, and fairly unsure about what he's going to tell her. Just cause he says he's gonna make everything alright, doesn't mean he knows how. LOL Also, Marie is definately freaking, she keeps wanting to talk, and it seems like he's avoiding the subject. And with these two's history, they're definately goning to jump to conclusions. *rolls eyes* They can't ever seem to get anything straight.