I *love* this chapter. I like a lot how Marie starts to understand everything. The fact that she believed that Logan only have Jean in mind and later she was discovering that the draw was her, not Jean.

The fact that in the end, after all these weeks running and wanting to hide of Logan, she made stops in a lot of places and do “stupid” things like the cheeseburger in the striptease club… is cute. She could have stop in a town and wait for him to found her, but she wanted to be found like if she hasn´t stop. Al least, in the beginning.

The attack of the man in the motel, and the eternal-knight-in-shinning-adamantium-Logan is so good. I sigh a big “awwwwwwwwww” when she says: “You smell so good, I’ve missed it so much. You coat barely smells like you anymore. It’s just really faint right here at the collar. Mostly it smells like me now.” She was so open right there, like if she was tired of hide her feelings, of running away, of everything. She only wanted to say “I missed you” and forgets everything.

Author's Response: The drawing was something that i had in mind at the beginning of the first chapter. Logan's feelings for her had been growing and morphing long before either of them realized.

Actually the trail in concidental. Because she realzies that if she just stops and waits, it'll be hard for him to find her. Because he'd still be looking. So, while on her trek to a suitable place, she leave a pretty obviouly blatant trail. And she makes sure to do memorable things.

She's so very lost in her own actions that she forgets that there's a mean world all around her. It's part of who she is, and a long lasting effect of life at the mansion. She's forgotten the harsh realities that are out there. Luckily for her, Logan's just as eager to see her, and he hasn't forgotten the harsh world. I figure creeps are everywhere, you just have to know where to look.

I find it really hard to swallow that she would not have looked through his jacket pockets at all for the whole month that she'd been on the run and sleeping with his jacket, and that she only now heard the rustling of the paper. Sorry!
I also struggle with coincidences such as the perfect timing of his arrival to save her from the clerk.
I'm not sure whether this is coming to a close now or whether it's going to get better..

Author's Response: I had my husbands coast for the enitre year of 2005 while he was deployed in Iraq, and didn't lokoin them until two weeks before he came home. She's not been paying attnetion to much. Logan was very far away from her when he got the text. And he did as she told him, went to the desk before he went to her room.

Beautiful. Next please.

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you liked!

More I need more!

Author's Response: I'm gonna have Corpal Tunnel if I keep up with all these demands. *grins* Thanks so much for the review!