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Date: 08/25/2015 5:29:52 PM Title: Last Call
Bittersweet but with a happy ending...just have to love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. I loved writing this story!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2011 8:32:41 AM Title: Last Call
Just ran across this story and it's so good -- poignant and real. Racing to read the next chapter...
Author's Response: I'm sorry that I didn't reply earlier! I'm glad you read it, how did you like the rest?
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2010 1:56:36 AM Title: Last Call
*HUG YOUU*
Thank you thank you thank you! This is so wonderful. I'm glad they cleared the air and they talked.
And Logan for once knew that Rogue's in love with him.
Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you loved it. I was soooo worried about their heart to heart. I was afraid that Logan's emotions didn't come across in it. I was afraid that it would seem stilted in conversation inseat of the raw resigned emotion that he felt. I was anxious that he wouldn't come across as just a guy who knew that he's screwed up and had this chance to explain everything out, but was more than massively afraid that she wouldn't understand. So, thanks for loving it. If you'd like to expound further on.. anything, send me a message, ok?rn
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2010 1:15:24 PM Title: Last Call
This chapter is so sad but at the same time so romantic. For Marie it must be so hard to deal with Logan when he is thinking in Jean. That type of love, where you are totally and madly in love with someone and must to be there for him even if he doesn´t see how much he´s hurting you… well, it´s simply so sad. But I think it is a beautiful way to love someone. She wants him to be happy, or only the normal-badass-Logan, she wants him to forget all this pain because maybe then he´ll look at her and see the truth feelings she has.
I like a lot the part when she´s in the bar and he´s sooo drunk that doesn´t see her there. I can imagine it perfectly… the smoke, smelling the sour aroma of alcohol, the sadness, the pain of watching him saying that he loves you even when you can say that he´s thinking in other woman.
In the last half, when they´re in Marie´s apartment, in the bed… I like it, even if it´ll be a mistake later, I had done the same thing. I like how you´ve write that moment when she thinks “if I can´t have everything, at least I want one night, I want to feel loved physically.”
Angst and drama are always good, and the chapter is all this with little touches of sad romance.
Author's Response: This was the culmination of weeks of listening to the song that this chapter is named after. Sitting there at my computer desk, listening to music. *kicks it* stupid radio station.
She wants and loves him so much that she's really ready and willing to risk everything they have. Also, she's so overcom with what-if's and maybe's that sshe doesn't see the clues all around her. Silly Marie. Always making it harder on her self.
I'm glad you liked this kick off. It was supposed to be a oneshot, but due to overwhelming response, it's abviously continued.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2009 2:03:28 PM Title: Last Call
plz plz plz update soon!!!
Date: 07/13/2009 8:37:26 AM Title: Last Call
hey there, and sorry it took me so long to finally read the new chapter :(
well, well, all I can say is poor Marie...having all the powers all the time seems cool at first, but not if you can't control them and you're busy throwing up all the time...
and lol @ all the Emma-hate...I don't like her all that much either, so that made me laugh ^^
Author's Response: Hey, no problem. Everyones got a non-fandom obsesssed part of their life. Whether by necessity or design. *grins* It could be really cool for her to have all her powers, once she manages to get everything under control. And I Emma is so fn wo write. It's really a breath of fresh air.
Date: 05/31/2009 6:59:38 AM Title: Last Call
who's excited? you need to ask? I am, I am!! =D
I guess I'm the only one who isn't super-thrilled because of the baby (sorry, I just don't like baby-fics...it's not that I don't like babies, coz who doesn't like babies, but...uh...yeah. I'll just shut up now), *but* I think you did a great job with getting the whole pregnancy thing into the story and making it feel *real*.
can't wait to see where you're taking this :)
Author's Response: You're on the same pags as my beta. As much as she hates babyfics, she loves this story. Now. It tore her up inside when I wrote the first few chapters and it was all hardcore angst. But she feels a lit like you.
I'm glad it worked out that well. The point of this story isn't the baby, it's the things they gotta learn along the way. Altough, with Marie going all nutso, I"m thinking they should sleep in the Danger Room. So things don't get sretroyed, but with Kitty subconciously phasing into it...
Date: 05/27/2009 1:07:43 PM Title: Last Call
First of all YAY you updated! and secondly, guess who! lol it's My Broken Quill who TMI'd you from fanfiction.com with the review that you deserve.
god, it's been a while since i've read this and i've decided to re-read it so i can give you a review as briliant as the delicious ones you give me - and of course because your story is tasty. McFlurry tasty ... that's some serious taste.
*'I wanted more than just almost’s and barely’s for the rest of my life'
I am a word junky, seriously i get shivers when people hit THAT spot, and that line just made me wish i had written it.
really brilliant start, you're rogue is very uh what's the word? ... prone to meloncholy. i like her, yet the fact that it's her that logan relies on to get him our of the rut he's in says a lot about her too.
and i also like the fact that the hints about who logan wants is quite subtle, even when you mention logan's messages we think like rogue and take it as the mumblings of a drunk guy. and i'm in love with the last hint, about him leaving his jacket.
one thing i've always had difficulty with is writing a drunk logan (and btw, you're drunk logan was HAWT!), i mean, how do you know after how much he gets drun by?
and finally - the sex. i like how you made it a blur, like it was too much for rogue to process. kinda overwhelming for her and how there are hidden 'i'll be back' kind of messages in his goodbye too.
okay, so my review wasn't as good as yours but i'm currently low on sleep and keep blinking like an owl lol. well i'll either see you at the nex chapter of LC or at P3 of my story. whichever comes 1st
mwah askita
Author's Response: Girl, how could I forget you. Sorry I haven't replied to your email. See... I've been busy. mmmmm.... McFlurries. Now you'e got me rereading it. She's very someone else said it nicely.. I can't remember if it was here or ff.net or LJ, but she's damaged. Nicely so. I tried to let the reader pick up on stuff Marie herself was thinking and saying without connecting the dots. I left it open ended so that there was no definitive anwser on how he gets drunk, we just know he does. (HAWT huh?) I prefer to write sex like that, you don't need sticky details, just the emotion and what's relevant to the plot line. *grins* see you next Chap!
Date: 03/10/2009 2:33:48 AM Title: Last Call
Okay its been a month and that was a good chapter to bring yourself back with-hope all is well on the vacation front and update update update!
Author's Response: I know it's been forever. I feel like a bitch. So sorry, everything is doing great and I have to work on 'Futures Unknown' before I can work on Last Call again. *grins* thanks for the review!
Date: 02/11/2009 3:47:24 PM Title: Last Call
Pleeeaaaseee???? One more? Do I have to employ puppy dog eyes?
Author's Response: Don't worry, I"m gonna work on it tonight!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2009 4:27:45 PM Title: Last Call
Wow, impressively angsty!
and I loved this sweet description:
"He set my blood on fire and did his best to quench the flames."
Author's Response: *grins* It was meant to be an angsty One Shot, to make people cry. But they demanded more, and I had an idea swiming around in my head, and Lord knows I can't make people suffer willingly. *grins* I'm really glad you like it!
Date: 01/25/2009 1:10:22 AM Title: Last Call
All right. I'm good and addicted now; squirmin' on the hook too. I love your writing style. Guess that means I'm gonna have to go back and find your other WIP and catch up on that one too, huh? Glad to see you're going to continue this one though! Excellent job!
Author's Response: I love having people that way, fiending. It's good for the constitution. Thanks so much for your review! I think all the feedback is what's getting me writing on this one, although I plan to write on Futures later too. I think the slightly shorter chapters are getting people to read. People see my 6,000-4,000 word monster chapters and say 'I'll come back and read later!'
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2009 9:59:19 PM Title: Last Call
I love it! Please post the next chapter soon.
I really like the idea of Marie running away after she has had enough of Logan's behavior. I'm glad that he is looking for her but I hope it's for the right reasons...
Nice work!
Author's Response: In the beginning she ran because she didn't want to hear him say that he couldn't be with her. Now she's running for fear of the confrontation. I like to think that although Logan didn't act or react properly to any given situation in X3, he did react. I think it was easier for Logan to drink himself into a stupor than it was for him to deal. Just like I think it was easier for marie to run from him and her own weakness than it was for her to deal. *grins*
Date: 01/24/2009 2:18:01 PM Title: Last Call
This is definately worth continuing. Great work so far. I always like it when Logan has to face up to the fact that he screwed up.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on it now.
Date: 01/24/2009 8:55:49 AM Title: Last Call
The picture didn't look right, he left his coat, Marie took the coat with her.........you HAVE to continue this so we can find out that he's started to draw HER instead of Jean!!!!!
(that is where that plot line was going, wasn't it???)
Author's Response: Very perceptive. But there's some stuff that even you can't see coming.
Date: 01/24/2009 8:09:37 AM Title: Last Call
I'm going with the other reviews: Very powerful so far, with a lot of potential. So please do continue :o).
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad everyone is loving and wanting more of this! I hope more people jump onto the bandwagon!
Date: 01/24/2009 7:38:31 AM Title: Last Call
Yes, this was great and sad and absolutely needs to be continued (please)!
Author's Response: Well, if everyone insists!
Date: 01/24/2009 4:30:16 AM Title: Last Call
Nonononono this is not finished, this can't be finished!
Sequel pweeeeeeeease.
Author's Response: You sound like my beta, Meg. LOL She tells me I have to write now...
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2009 1:59:55 AM Title: Last Call
Wow. This was very good. Please write a second part.
Author's Response: All this overwhelming support and pleads for more is really going to my head. Thanks for the review it's doing a lot to boost my muses!
Date: 01/24/2009 1:45:11 AM Title: Last Call
Logan was up and drinking coffee at my kitchen table when I crawled out of bed. Neither of us spoke. It was awkward and clumsy and I wanted to get everything out in the open, so he could make some kinda off hand remark and everything would be ok again and we could pretend we were just friends and hadn’t crossed into forbidden territory last night. I absently wondered if he smelt the shame rolling off of me. I wondered what our mixed scent smelled like, and felt a twinge of pain in my heart at the thought.
This is especially heartbreaking, and I love it.
Please do continue! :)
Author's Response: I wanted to make it so angsty that people hated and love me att he same time. I find that part very poignant, I'm glad I got my point across. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 01/24/2009 1:34:03 AM Title: Last Call
Please do continue - this is powerful stuff!
Author's Response: Looks like the due to popular demand I'll be writing a second part, maybe a thinrd. I wanted to anyway. *grins* Thanks for the review!