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Oooh, Logan: "Marie has to stay, only thing for it."
Oh! This is getting good. I'm excited to read the next chapter. =)
Ha! Logan's such an ass. It makes me laugh. Another chapter full of humor and ways for these two to get in trouble. I guess my only quibble with this chapter is your saying Marie served two tours in Afghanistan, but then you say she knows where contraband can be found in the Iraqi city of Fallujah. Please feel free to slap me if you meant for Marie to have gleaned that information from Carol or someone else. Again, though, wonderful chapter. I continue to look forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Ach! Actually, what happened was originally I had "her" (Carol) serving two in Afghanistan and then one Iraq, but I figured (a) Carol's pretty young and (b) this is a world without Bush so there probably wouldn't have been an Iraq war, heh. But then I didn't change the city! Thanks so much for pointing that out! Will fix.
his dick’s about frozen to his leg.
What an image... *dies laughing*