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[Report This]Date: 12/28/2010 4:44:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Yes! I love the way you show Rogue's mind hardening & adjusting to her circumstances. That's character development well done! Reminds me of Jenn's "Jus Ad Bellum" ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2010 10:12:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
"morality is expensive during times like these"
no kidding! you really sum of the complexities of their predicament in just that one line...awesome!
Date: 03/29/2009 12:01:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
OH My GOD! this is awesome. I don't know why you ever stopped writing it. Please, if you have any humanity left in you, write more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 10:51:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
More? Please, pretty please? It's really good.
Author's Response: Thanks! You guys got me going again. Hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/2008 7:26:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm extremely interested in this and where it's going. Please update soon! I love your imagery.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 09/22/2008 10:14:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, really awesome plot going here. I can't wait to see how Logan fits into it all and if Rogue can do what she's been asked (and how wrong it'll all go).
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like how it turns out! :)
Date: 09/22/2008 5:27:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ack! I missed you! Sorry about that - thanks for letting me try to beta it anyway. Maybe next time I will get my email in enough time. It doesn't matter, this is still my favorite story of the moment!
You rock this!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I saw that you had e-mailed me, but I haven't gotten a chance to look at it yet since my schoolwork this week is crazy overloaded, but thank you so much for doing it! I'll def send you the next chapter. :D
[Report This]Date: 09/22/2008 4:52:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is such a great story. I can really feel Rogue's pain in this. I almost feel like I am there right with her.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 09/22/2008 2:42:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is getting even better. The tone fits the story perfectly, even Scott's 'breakdown' doesn't feel weird or awkward, it's just something that happened, and reader has to deal with it.
There are nice details sprinkled through the story, mainly Marie's memories of the past, and they give a brief reprieve from the hell she's living in now, but you have integrated them in to the story well, they do not mess up the plot, but rather enhance it.
For your plans for the future I'd say write what feels best for you, but I'm having slight difficulties imagining this written from Logan's POV. Might be interesting to see.
Waiting for the next update with curiosity. :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :D And we'll see what happens with the POV. I'll def get it beta-ed this time if I switch POVs.
Date: 09/22/2008 1:03:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow. This is tragic. yet oddly enough it kind of makes me smile a little. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Please bring it on soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm definitely working on the next chapter. :D