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[Report This]Date: 12/28/2010 4:42:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
gah! what a heart-breaker! I'm crying inside, really. I do wish you'd tell us what exactly happened to Logan, b/c really, I'd like to know what could have killed him.
...or is he not REALLY dead after all, and will show up in the end and surprise them all?
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2009 12:55:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I know I just reviewed for chapter 1, but I just finished chapters 2 and 3....
please please please please update this story!! It is beautiful, the writing, the pain... please!!!
Date: 12/06/2009 8:01:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I love it!! Your writing style is so descriptive in a very emotional way! This is my favorite line this chapter:
"Some called her a legend. Some called her a goddess. And her knees were in the fucking mud.
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I can't wait to read more!
~Anji
Date: 05/19/2009 5:37:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for continuing with this story! I love the new Rogue you've created. She's so strong and capable of anything. I can't wait to find out what happens when Logan catches her!
Please update as soon as you can--I love this story!
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 10:52:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
OHHH. I really like this, more please?
Author's Response: Working on it!
[Report This]Date: 03/26/2009 5:53:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
A brilliant twist on the old DoFP story. Grittier, more emotionally realistic, and absolutely fascinating. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 09/22/2008 9:18:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm transfixed. An original story line with great writing. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 09/17/2008 10:59:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not good with rewiews, I'm afraid, but lets give this a shot. Because this truly deserves it.
I like this one a lot. The world you have created has been used often before, but you managed to make it sound something new, fresh and interesting. I'm really looking forward for the next chapters.
Marie's numbness comes through loud and clear, but there's that little something that makes the reader think that there's more to it. That she hasn't fully given up yet. Or is that just my wishful thinking? Perhaps.
Aaand... owie. I probably have something more to say when next chapter arrives. Really, really looking forward for that.
Author's Response: Aw, you totally just made my day! And, yes, that's exactly the tone I was aiming for, and I think you've nailed the description better than I could have. You totally get a gigantic *hugglesquish* from me. <3
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2008 10:09:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a good story I really liked it....good job :D
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 09/16/2008 10:21:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent start.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 09/16/2008 8:24:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, good stuff. I like the somewhat dystopian set-up you've created for them here. Especially Rogue's knowledge that Logan's dead and her reaction to it (even if we kind of quietly hope that he's not and it's all been a horrible misunderstanding somehow.) It's a compelling start and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Great detail too, with the colours and flavours to describe people and events. I imagine the inside of Rogue's head at this point is a very interesting, if slightly scary, sort of place.
Author's Response: I think you nailed it exactly. And I'm definitely a big fan of the dystopian stories, but I think we'll see a change in setting within a few chapters. :D Thank you so so so much for the review. <3
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2008 7:47:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
An excellent beginning, well written and draws the reader into the story immediately. I don't think you really need a beta as I didn't see anything that needed changing. A beautiful job! I'm looking forward to more enjoyable reading.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the encouragement! I'm glad you didn't see any glaring errors. I get so paranoid that there's something embarrassing in the story right before I post it. And thanks for the five stars! I'll try to have the next chapter up sometime this week. :D
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2008 7:16:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love how dark and angsty it is. But I hope we get to see Logan. He can't be dead!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And you'll be seeing more of Logan soon. :D
Date: 09/16/2008 3:20:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome. I would be happy to beta - but I must admit, it doesn't need much work, if any.
If you want, just send it to sepetersen26@yahoo.com.
If not, then post more soon!!!! Please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It feels so weird to actually write something after lurking for so long, and I really didn't know how it would go. And I'll definitely take you up on the offer. Thanks again (plus a dozen more)! Reviews are love, and it means a lot to me. :)
Date: 09/16/2008 10:22:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing! It's so good that I don't mind that there isn't a lot of Logan in it yet. I hope you post more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! And Logan is definitely coming. I just want to set up Rogue's experiences first so that we all know what she's gone through, but Logan doesn't. Wonderful opportunity for conflict there. Again, I really appreciate you taking the time to review, and I adore your username.
Date: 09/16/2008 6:38:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good. I will be happy to beta for you. Just send it to alesiaglfyn@juno.com
Author's Response: Thank you so much for being the first reviewer to my first story. I'll definitely send the next chapter your way. :D