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[Report This]Date: 03/23/2009 5:42:00 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
Wow, that was a really strong chapter, it pulled at my heart strings.. very angsty and sad and emotional.
Tough one to write as Logan is always coming up with excuses and changing his mind, but it makes sense if we consider what it'd be like to have feelings for someone much younger than ourselves. We'd probably fight it too.
Date: 03/20/2009 1:34:39 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
You've got me HOOKED!! More please more.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! I'm hoping to get the next part up in an hour or so.
Date: 03/15/2009 9:29:50 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
AH! I've been lurking around waiting for this. I don't see why you're unhappy with it. Logan talking about stuff like this is hard to write, but you pulled it off. =D
Author's Response: Thanks :o) I think I just edited it too much - my eyes were about to drop out by the time I posted it! Glad it came across ok though.
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2009 8:55:03 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
Finally. Even if only one of them did any real talking, at least there was verbalization to be had. If given enough time, these two crazy kids might actually have a conversation! ;) Great job.
Author's Response: *lol* yeah - one talking is better than neither, right? They're getting there... slowly... *g*
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2009 6:38:00 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
u don't know how hard my heart lurched when he totally denied the talk the first time. I was literally in tears...... ugh even though he came back and now it seems he's starting to open up about eveything I was falling into that abyss with Rogue. ugh your good haha Now I have to patiently wait for that next chapter and hopefully it will end good yeah *nudge, nudge* lol =D
Author's Response: Thank you for the great feedback! I love that it drew you in like that :o) And as for the next chapter... I'm giving nothing away *evil grin*
Date: 03/15/2009 5:14:45 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
Gah!! I'm so mad at Logan! At least he can make up for it with this ride... I'm assuming he makes it better and not worse again.
Author's Response: 'I'm assuming he makes it better and not worse again.' *lol* I'm giving nothing away....
Date: 03/15/2009 4:34:51 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
It was about time they start talking...sort of. Nice.
Author's Response: Yeah - I don't think they're ever going to do the talk thing particularly well. Neither seem very talented in that area *g*
Date: 03/15/2009 3:35:36 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
Wow, I'm such a fan of this story, I love it every time you update! The emotions are so deep and especially in this chapter, the Logan you've created is just so distraught and it's torture how much they need to work things out, but you're writing is just so great, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it :oD
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2009 2:50:56 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
Well, at least they've started talking....though it seemed a bit one sided! Gah!! Rogue really needs to stop thinking so much and start talking a bit more!
It flows really well, so your editing skills are good!
So...when do we get an update? it's my bday on thursday :-)
Author's Response: 'It flows really well, so your editing skills are good!' - *lol* thanks. My editing skills had had enough by the time I posted it, so I'm glad it came across ok. I'm not sure if I'll be able to get the next chapter up any earlier, but you never know. Stranger things have happened! And happy birthday for Thursday :o)
Date: 03/15/2009 2:29:36 PM Title: Maybe's and what if's
Oh God, this is emotional torture with a side of stomach-clenching physical discomfort! I want to shake him until he realises she was never really young. He's it for her, and she's it for him and it's obvious, but he's making her miserable by staying away and she's too scared, cowardly and dense to realise it. So much for knowing him.
ARGH! *pulls hair in frustration*
Ahem. Okay. More please ;-)
Melanie
Author's Response: I think he does realise all that, deep down. He's just too damn stubborn, and has been making excuses for so long he doesn't know how to un-make them anymore. - Heh - that made so much more sense in my head before I wrote it *lol* They're both as bad as each other though. It's very frustrating! Hopefully the next chapter will be a bit lighter *g*