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Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2011 1:50:02 PM Title: Chapter 41

I have had so much fun reading this. You just don't even know. Thank you.

~Mia

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2011 11:39:12 AM Title: Chapter 41

Yeay, more chapters! I didn't see that one coming that Rachel is suddenly on their side - Todd was obvious.

Please update soon (both stories please)!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2011 11:47:03 PM Title: Chapter 41

You've definitely got me curious to what Elizaveta was getting at when she asked Logan what she did. I hope you update again soon. Loved the new chapter, keep up the great work.

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 9:09:26 PM Title: Chapter 40

Oh no, what is going to happen now that the registration act has past. All those poor kids. Aww such a sweet moment between Logan and Rogue. Such a touching moment. Hmm, I wonder what is up with Elizaveta? Can't wait to find out the answers to my questions, and to see Rogue focus on her own powers. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 9:07:08 PM Title: Chapter 40

Welcome back. Interesting, I wonder what caught Elizaveta's attention. Hmmm...

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 2:44:18 PM Title: Chapter 39

So good to have another chapter of this story. It was like after months of grueling diet and workout someone comes in with a huge keylime pie and says, this is now all you can have to eat for the next month, but as much as you can eat. That was what it was like to get a new chapter from you. Makes me incredibly unexpectedly happy. (Forgive my analogy, I'm dieting.)

~Mia

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 1:28:31 AM Title: Chapter 39

I really enjoyed this chapter! I love the relationship developing between Marie, Logan and the kids. And I never get tired of the dialogue/banter between Marie and Logan. You really do a great job of creating three dimensional characters that you root for and care about.


Also, this line cracked me up. Great reference to one of my favorite SNL skits:

“More cowbell,” Rogue murmured, smirking at Logan. He rolled his eyes, but still smiled back.

I can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 8:58:25 AM Title: Chapter 39

Great update. Loved the interaction with the two kids, and then later Logan hard time dealing with how the other kids are reacting to when he trains them. Great emotional scene. I'm also glad to see more of Rogue and Logan interaction. That is always a good thing. :D

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 8:53:08 AM Title: Chapter 39

I can't tell you how happy I am to see that you posted a new chapter! I do not claim to be psychic by any means but I was thinking of you the other day and wondering if you'd come back to this. I can't wait to read this but I'm off to a crazy busy day at work right now. But I will definitely read this tonight for sure. I really love this story and I have missed it. Thanks for updating!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2011 10:44:47 PM Title: Chapter 38

Forgive me if I sound like a stalker but PLEASE come back and update this! It was fantastic when you came back a few months ago after being gone for so long. You were really on roll! Please don't leave us hanging! This story and Last Chance are really fantastic! Please come back!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2011 7:24:51 PM Title: Chapter 38

I hope that you will update this soon because I miss this (and Last Chance)!

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2011 9:19:01 AM Title: Chapter 38

I'm really enjoying this! Although Marie's vision is making me anxious for them. That being said, I really love the relationship that you've developed between Marie and Logan! I look forward to your next update.

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2011 7:08:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

Just to let you know that you managed to find all the emotion and sensuality without getting too much into the detail. Explicit only works if it works for the story and the writer; it's obvious when its forced. I particularly loved the detail about Logan instinctively protecting Marie from his claws, even though he had no knowledge of popping them. That speaks so much of the bond between all facets of each of them, I thought. Great job!

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 10:44:51 PM Title: Chapter 38

Great chapter. I was wondering if the man at the grill was going to be some how connect with what Rogue saw in her vision. I can't wait to find out. I hope there is a happy ending though. Rogue and Logan are finally a happy couple starting there own life, I'd hate to see that all come to a terrible end. Keep up the great work. :D

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 8:25:53 AM Title: Chapter 38

Ooo mysterious man. Is is good or evil, or just watching for no good reason. Very, very interesting. I also like the girl-bond growing 'tween liz and marie.

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 3:21:49 AM Title: Chapter 38

Great update! I like the idea of Rogue and the little girl bonding - at first I didn't like the girl at first, but now I do.
Please update soon!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2011 12:30:44 AM Title: Chapter 38

Very nice dialogue between Rogue and Elizaveta - the trust the child has towards her and the affection Rogue has for her really shines through. I won't tell you my guesses are about what's going to happen - I would be too mortified if I was way off the mark lol! Thanks for the update - great work as always! :)

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 1:08:24 PM Title: Chapter 37

lol that might have traumatized the little girl even more.
Please update soon!

Reviewer: serafim Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 12:45:42 PM Title: Chapter 37

Oh wow, that is some mysterious stuff going on right now! I am so hooked, lol, a thousand guesses are running through my head about where you are taking this but I'll stay patient - your updates are awesome. Good job by the way, your writing is excellent. :)

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 12:28:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

Wow, Rogue's mind turned suddenly to ruins without her otherself. I can't wait to see what you've got cooked up for the next chapter, and we find out what Rogue's vision was really about.

Reviewer: Oracle13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 8:17:54 PM Title: Chapter 36

Okay, forgive me for being a Master of the Obvious, but that is NOT a good vision!!! I hope things don't end up badly for them...

Reviewer: TrickyBusiness Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 5:03:33 PM Title: Chapter 36

Oh no. I'm a little nervous to find out what happens next. I hope both Logan and Rogue and the kids will be alright. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: desy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 2:58:45 PM Title: Chapter 36

Great another update! I wonder if in her vision, Marie is pregnant and whom Logan tries to save - their baby or Marie... Please update soon!

Reviewer: jnet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2011 2:09:22 PM Title: Chapter 36

OOO now that's a heck of a twist!

Reviewer: g-love99 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2011 1:48:01 AM Title: Chapter 35

wow! just found this...so amazing...now that they are together it would be great to how they handle the halfway house and the social/political situation....thx!

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