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Date: 07/15/2008 12:20:07 PM Title: I Lost My Best friend Too
Just caught up with the story and Yay! I am so loving it! I love that Logan is affected by Marie. One question though... Is Marie a mutant? Has she not gone thru the change?
Author's Response: You'll find out later on if Marie can control her power or not. I'd love to tell you now, but it'd ruin the story so keep following along! Thanks for your review and I'm sooooo happy you like it!
Date: 07/15/2008 9:07:02 AM Title: I Lost My Best friend Too
I like the concept. You really need a beta, you are skipping tenses in a few places, which makes it difficult to read. If you would like send me the entire thing and I will be happy to beta.
Author's Response: That'd be great! But how do I send you it? I'm really new to this stuff still.....
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2008 1:42:26 AM Title: I Lost My Best friend Too
Great...now it's getting even better...smut I love it....can't wait to see how Logan and Marie get together somehow...great job!!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Everytime I get a new review, it makes me stay up even longer to write another chapter! I check like every 15 minutes, so they for checking up on the story so soon! Your wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2008 12:07:43 AM Title: Locked Out
Please....don't leave us hanging like this!!! ARRGGGG!!!! More pretty please...
Date: 07/14/2008 5:46:26 PM Title: How You Make Money
Well, this is getting mighty interesting, when will Logan warm up to Marie??? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Soon, I promise. Thanks for liking my story!
Author's Response: Soon, I promise. Thanks for liking my story!
Date: 07/14/2008 11:57:18 AM Title: Lack of Sleep
Actually I liked this chapter best of all. I am really enjoying this story!!! I do wish the chapters were longer though. LOL I love that you added Logans point of view! Thanks! LOL Update soon!!
Author's Response: I'm trying to extend the chapters as much as I can, but I promise I'll be updating the a few chapter a day or I'll try. I'm glad your enjoying the story!
Date: 07/14/2008 9:15:52 AM Title: Lack of Sleep
Very interesting...can't wait for the next chapter...will Logan and Marie be romantically involved?
Date: 07/13/2008 7:24:23 PM Title: The Funeral
Oooh, I'm intrigued. Can't wait to see what developes.
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2008 7:20:42 PM Title: The Funeral
Heehee... Fun!
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Date: 07/13/2008 6:08:06 PM Title: The Funeral
I like the start of this! I am anxious to read more.
I hope you do Logan's point of view as well. As I would LOVE to read it.
You might want to read it over because it seems a bit stilted though. Some of it seems very formal. I have found that if you write how most people talk it somes out more natural.