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Reviewer: smilinghoney Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2013 9:31:05 PM Title: The Funeral

I don't know how I missed this story when it was being updated years ago, but I'm so glad I did. Now, though, will our begging get you to update and finish this story? Pretty please? Just when I thought Logan and Marie were going to start their happily ever after, you add more twists to it. But it's oh so good. I'm dying to see how they get Marie back and is this going to be the Marie we know that loves Logan with all her being? So many unanswered questions! Please please come back to this wonderful story soon!

Reviewer: LaKinta Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 12:36:23 PM Title: The Funeral

I was sucked in to this story from the first moment. You trailed me along, like riding a wave, making me believe that the crest would crash only to find out that we're still miles from land. I want the happy ending right away but the tension and plot twists make suck me in even further, making me beg for the happy ending while relishing the heated tension. I don't review often, but reading your story compelled me to tell you that I am now fully addicted to you and your writings. I demand more chapters and I demand them frequently. Cheers to you and your muse.

Waiting impatiently,
LaKinta

Reviewer: LilaLaila Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 3:35:04 PM Title: The Funeral

after u killed Eon on ur other story i wasnt sure wether i want to read something of u again ;-) I am afraid u might kill and rape the main character. Well, I will just to have find out, hm?

Reviewer: Shuga Signed star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2008 8:49:17 AM Title: The Funeral

Im loving this story and I love the unexpected twists that keep me wondering. I cant wait to see more of this and check for updates when ever I can. Although the X-men have been mentioned in passing where do they sit in this story? Good work, cant wait for more!

Reviewer: alesia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2008 8:21:04 PM Title: The Funeral

I tried to responding using your email address but it bounced. I will be happy to beta send it to alesiaglfyn@juno.com

Author's Response: alright, I'll send it over one way or another.

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 7:24:23 PM Title: The Funeral

Oooh, I'm intrigued. Can't wait to see what developes.

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 7:20:42 PM Title: The Funeral

Heehee... Fun!
xXx

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 6:08:06 PM Title: The Funeral

I like the start of this! I am anxious to read more.

I hope you do Logan's point of view as well. As I would LOVE to read it.

You might want to read it over because it seems a bit stilted though. Some of it seems very formal. I have found that if you write how most people talk it somes out more natural.

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