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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2021 1:49:21 PM Title: Cold

Great beginning! Would love to see more.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2008 11:12:32 AM Title: Cold

Very well done Brandon - I love the way you described the cold as stone cold, death cold (gave me the shivers just reading it!) and Wolverine sounds just like he should, you've thought up some great lines - can't wait to see what happens next so when your done keep pestering your sister to update as quickly as she can! x

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Date: 06/27/2008 8:28:27 AM Title: Cold

I'm surprised Logan didn't gut Bobby for calling him grandpa.

Cute story, update soon!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 1:41:23 PM Title: Cold

LOL This was a cute fic. I have to say I see Logan as being that grumpy in the mornings! LOL My favorite part is these lines here...

“First of all, ya little icicle, call me Wolverine. Second, if you’re looking for a fight, you’ve found one.”
“Bring it, Grandpa.” Bobby’s gaze was ice cold.

Bobby must have a death wish calling Logan grandpa but i just loved it! Made me crack up.

Author's Response: Brandon: Thanks, it took a long time to come up with those!

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 1:32:47 PM Title: Cold

A 9 year old wrote this? Impressive - he should keep at it. (I just hope he isn't reading the other stories on here...)
Good job, Brandon!

Author's Response: Brittany: Yeah, he did. And trust me, he isn't. What kind of sister would I be if I let him?? ;]rnBrandon: Thanks for your support and I'll keep writing!

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