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Reviewer: Wanderlust Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 7:57:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just read this for the first time and loved it. Thanks for posting. I particularly like the way you've characterized Logan. All rough edges and a good heart. Sigh.

Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2009 5:41:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wish I had my own Logan

Reviewer: Watching Eternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2008 10:37:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

That's so sweet. I love that last line.

Reviewer: litlen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2008 3:18:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

beautiful fic - *melts at that last line*

Reviewer: Tigress Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 2:05:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. The ending made me happy and I loved you way you organized everything. It made the story feel very much inside Rogue's head. Lovely.

Reviewer: Rhogue Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2008 11:19:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very cute story =)

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2008 4:08:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 3:51:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good one!

Reviewer: DitzyMariposa Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 1:27:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

“I care about you. Probably more than I should…”
I love that line.

'I couldn’t help admiring the way the sun shimmered on his bare shoulders and back. The way his biceps knotted up. How the small beads of sweat pooled slowly together.'
Wow! What a visual. Give me a sec, I need to go visualize some more...

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 4:05:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I see this story has had 42 hits, and no reviews left. That's just sheer laziness, 'cause this story is powerful. I don't care if there are little grammatical quirks because English isn't your first language. The power inside the story overwhelms those small things. That last gesture, that hand over the heart, tore me open. You did good.

Author's Response: Thanks! Wasn't even really expecting to get any rewies with this one. PG-13 and drama aren't the things to attract readers.rnrnGrammar, my arch enemy. One day I shall slay you until... What? I already do that? On daily basis? ;)rnrnI'm happy that you found the story from behind errors. :)rnrn

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