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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2013 1:31:15 AM Title: She just have to say it

I like the general concept of the story and most of the lines, but little things like spelling errors and mistakes in punctuation make it very difficult to tell what lines are thoughts or actually spoken. I would definitely recommend a beta for future stories, just to clean then up. Very nice plot!

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 12:52:11 AM Title: She just have to say it

You need to get your story beta read - the errors make it difficult to read.

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