The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
Barely Legal Since 2000
I like the general concept of the story and most of the lines, but little things like spelling errors and mistakes in punctuation make it very difficult to tell what lines are thoughts or actually spoken. I would definitely recommend a beta for future stories, just to clean then up. Very nice plot!
You need to get your story beta read - the errors make it difficult to read.