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Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 6:24:35 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Ooh, Scott's back! Yay! Nice touch. Although I'm curious to see if you work Charles's body-snatching into this (I hope you saw that scene after the credits so you can work it in! XD). It'd be interesting. Neeext chaptaaa! Bye, Jean! We'll miss you!

Reviewer: Cassandra Lee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 11:27:09 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Sorry I haven't reveiwed but I've been keeping up with this story and I'm lovin it so far. I was really pissed about the whole Scott killing thing in X3 also. I hope you keep posting soon.

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 10:01:24 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Hi! I've come late to this and just read all 11 chapters in one go .. fabulous work. You plot so well that the words just leap off the page, and the grammar, typos etc that seem to be worrying you aren't even noticeable. (And I'm a professional editor.) I hope you have a few more chapters for us, but well done on keeping this so tight and suspenseful so far. Look forward to reading the rest!

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2008 12:44:02 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

You're doing an excellent job with this story. It feels so familiar since I've seen X3 many times, and yet you've juggled the details around so smoothly to make it a fresh take. Love it!

Reviewer: MandaEvelyn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 5:34:02 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

This chapter was perfect. Definately lived up to my expectations. Bravo.

I'm a huge Cyke fan. Always have been. Just never liked Jean. So I'm glad that you brought him back. The way you went about it was very original. Again, bravo. :D

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Rogue will be awake in it, right? Should be interesting to see how everyone reacts to her - especially Bobby and Logan. *evil grin* I can't wait!!

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 3:59:40 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

I'm rubbish at reading and reviewing these days - lazy *g* But I'm enjoying this - it's dragged me out my lurkdom! I like how you're developing X3's excuse for a plot into something so much better. I'm glad about Scott, I hated what happened to him in X3 and I love your idea for reversing that. And I totally love John's snarky little comments. He rocks! - the spiffy uniform bit in the last chapter made me laugh out loud *g*

Looking forward to finding out what happens next.

Reviewer: CocoLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 10:37:01 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

I'm a fan of scott too, especially when he is with somebody other than Marie and when him and Logan are buddies:)

good job on this chapter! can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 8:40:02 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Thank you! Thank you for loading up this chapter and not letting us suffer long to get a another update. Another great chapter. You have a talent for writing a compelling story with no wasted action. Every word has its purpose, with no pointless filler.

Reviewer: Solidae Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 8:29:48 AM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Wow, that actually moved me. Why did you wait so long before writing? You are a wonderful author, and I hope that this story is just the first of many we will see from you.
More please!

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