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Date: 07/05/2008 6:14:10 PM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes
I know I didn't reply to the other chapters, but I came back to this one, because this is another chapter I really, really enjoyed. The Rogue/Jean/Phoenix interaction was really good, and aside from a few random spots where I wanted to reword repetive spots in sentences (I'm an English major, I just do it unconsciously. X3;; Sorry.) I thought it carried the plot nicely, and gave Jean her due, and Rogue hers. I can't imagine what it would be like to absorb that much raw power and fury from the Phoenix. The nod to the Rogues of other AUs was a nice touch. ^_^ Made me happy to have her cartoon form mentioned, and some of the other characters, although I would've liked to see X-men Evo mixed in there too. XD Teen Rogue seeing a COMPLETELY different version of teen Rogue. Lol The thought alone is tempting me to do some kind of strange crossover fic.
Long story short: really liked this chapter. I thought the telepathic interaction was spot on, and that you let Jean end it instead of Rogue just killing her off gave the chapter a nice twist instead of just rushing through it.
[Report This]Date: 06/10/2008 4:21:13 PM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes
I think that you're being way too hard on yourself. This was a great chapter. One thing though, please don't let Jean live. You've GOT to kill her off. Please. Pretty please. That was the one thing about the third X-Men movie that I actually liked - that Jean Grey died.
And yes, I realize that I have "Jean issues." But hey, doesn't everyone who follows the Rogue/Logan ship have them to an extent! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the nice review. oh and though I don't want to spoil anything I'll just say this: I like Jean's character... but not that much. ;)
Date: 06/10/2008 8:06:49 AM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes
My only question is: When will I be able to read more!?!?!?
I'm a greedy girl, aren't I?
(ok - that was two questions.)
Date: 06/10/2008 4:18:54 AM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes
Evil cliffhanger!