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Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2016 7:57:43 AM Title: Bleeding Love

So entertaining from start to finish. Just stumbled upon this story and so glad I did!!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2013 6:11:44 AM Title: Bleeding Love

Great fic. Totally lost myself in it. The ending was sweet and fun too. Great job!

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Date: 10/09/2012 4:52:21 AM Title: Choices

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Reviewer: Ebony10 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2011 1:04:28 AM Title: Bleeding Love

OMG. That was the best fic ever!!

The banter! Oh, the banter. I loved how you kept the banter even through the fight scenes. You made Rogue kick ass. I mean, I love Anna Paquin as Roque, but I so wish they had used some more elements of her personality from the comics. And the way you wrote the relationships she has with the other characters was perfect. Also, I like Scott so I'm glad you brought him back. Also, I LOVE the Prof so I'm ecstatic you kept him alive. Wonderful fic!

Reviewer: notmyself Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 3:46:27 PM Title: Bleeding Love

This truly was a very fun story to read. My favorite was the action, gore and Laughlin. Really an entertaining way to escape on a rainy afternoon. I appreciate it.

~Mia

Reviewer: notmyself Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 3:14:20 PM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

Just about all names derived from Mary mean bitter. Mara means bitter with the added part of meaning bitter water or water not fit to drink. (My daughter's name.) Marie meaning bitter sea isn't that far of a stretch is it?

~Mia

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 11:49:52 AM Title: Bleeding Love

You butchered me!” the other man moaned~ what a classic line, I love the sense of humor you gave to wolverine in this last chapter. I've been following this fic since you first posted it, that was a great ending just loved it.

Look forward to reading your next story.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2008 5:45:23 AM Title: Bleeding Love

Those first paragraphs are just... *dies laughing*

... and then... just awwwwwwwwwww.

Great end!

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 7:59:05 PM Title: The Girl

*Laughing* I love Logan! He's such a sweetheart. "I miss Magneto." I love all the little details he knows, that's so cute. ^___^ You're right; Scott might have died all over again if Logan had told him her real name! ^_^ He's the only one who can honestly know it. I can see him shouting it in a panic, and everyone goes, "Marie?!" and then drops dead instantly. Nice going, Wolverine. Lol I like the way you paint Scott; I'm too used to him being a jerk and stick in the mud. This is a nice change.

Author's Response: Thanks. I always preferred a more laid-back Scott myself. And I'm glad you're enjoying it and really glad that you reviewed! :)

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 6:40:32 PM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

Poor Joe! T_T That's terrible... I thought he was going to end up dying, or getting killed or something. Poor man. Thank goodness Wolverine managed to get there in time to speak to him one last time. And it was nice for Joe to have gotten some company before he died. Sad chapter, but a good one. A girl named "Marie..." Coincidence? I think not...

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 6:31:24 PM Title: If This Is Goodbye

AWWWWWWWW! No, you're absoltuely right, she needed a good cry. Yay! And you ARE working it in! Teeheeee! Nice little segment at the beginning, giving us a look at Rogue's past and her relationship in-fic with Xavier.

I wonder what Logan's up to... He sure as hell had better not be runnin' from her again! Poor Scott...

Wanted to say I appreciate you using her actual accent in the story. I always try to, because I feel that's a big part of her character. ^_^ Nice job with it.

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 6:24:35 PM Title: Black Is The Colour Of My True Love's Heart

Ooh, Scott's back! Yay! Nice touch. Although I'm curious to see if you work Charles's body-snatching into this (I hope you saw that scene after the credits so you can work it in! XD). It'd be interesting. Neeext chaptaaa! Bye, Jean! We'll miss you!

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 6:16:42 PM Title: Sleeping Beauty

I have to say: I am so glad you saved John. I love him. *Laughs* That ending was great, and a very Pyro thing for him to do. In my post-X3 fic, I had to find a way to save him, since they don't really address it in the movie, and Bobby and Kitty are busy getting Jimmy off of the island.

I wish I had reviewed this story when I started reading it, but I was reading at work, didn't have an account, and the next day the archives were down, so, no reviews. XP At that point, you only had up to chapter 7 or so, though. XD So I've been away for a bit. I'm loving that this is completed now, though, and that I can finally tell you how much I'm enjoying this.

Can't wait to see what Rogue wants to do at Alkali Lake next chapter!

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 6:14:10 PM Title: Butterflies And Hurricanes

I know I didn't reply to the other chapters, but I came back to this one, because this is another chapter I really, really enjoyed. The Rogue/Jean/Phoenix interaction was really good, and aside from a few random spots where I wanted to reword repetive spots in sentences (I'm an English major, I just do it unconsciously. X3;; Sorry.) I thought it carried the plot nicely, and gave Jean her due, and Rogue hers. I can't imagine what it would be like to absorb that much raw power and fury from the Phoenix. The nod to the Rogues of other AUs was a nice touch. ^_^ Made me happy to have her cartoon form mentioned, and some of the other characters, although I would've liked to see X-men Evo mixed in there too. XD Teen Rogue seeing a COMPLETELY different version of teen Rogue. Lol The thought alone is tempting me to do some kind of strange crossover fic.

Long story short: really liked this chapter. I thought the telepathic interaction was spot on, and that you let Jean end it instead of Rogue just killing her off gave the chapter a nice twist instead of just rushing through it.

Reviewer: PsychoticElflet Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 5:50:46 PM Title: Choices

I LOVE this chapter. We all know Rogue didn't ACTUALLY take the Cure (and I wish that had chosen that ending in the movie, instead of just making it a deleted scene. XP That choice was crap.) and your explanation of it is fabulous. I loved her sudden realization of "What the hell am I doing? You leave that poor little boy alone!"

Even if we never find out if the little boy's mother and Pete take her advice and go to the Institute, I love this chapter. I know you said to review, well there you have it. Fantastic chapter, it immediately captured my interest. I love the ending. Her repeating Logan's words almost made me whimper with some confusing jumble of joy and sadness. XD And pride. Excellent work.

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 7:50:01 PM Title: Choices

It's surprisingly hard to get my hands on some kittens. I thought they were every where.

Author's Response: Save the kitties! I hope you like this new chapter :)

Reviewer: killerkittens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2008 7:47:04 PM Title: How To Be Dead

Ok, as far as cliffhangers go, I can live with this one. You haven't updated in a really long time, though. Seriously, it's been like, forever years. You have unfortunately forced my hand - for every day that passes without an update, I will kill a kitten. It will be small and adorable.

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 7:11:20 PM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

Wow, super update. I really hope you've got some more coming up fast. I'm loving your fic!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 9:02:24 AM Title: How To Be Dead

Jubes and her impossible timing.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 7:27:12 AM Title: How To Be Dead

I am glad that you didn't have Rogue immediately forgive Logan. Now, he is just going have to sweat it out like a big boy, haha.

I am glad that you are bringing back the Professor.

Such an amazing story!

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 5:11:14 AM Title: How To Be Dead

What an ending - I was expecting the big clinch, and then you hit us with that! Holy cliffhanger!

(And I love that Rogue was angry with him. He so deserves it.)

Reviewer: JaqofSpades Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2008 1:18:30 AM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

One of the reasons I love fanfic is the chance to mine more deeply into significant moments ... and you've done it so WELL here. Wonderful backstory for Joe, and as everyone has said, great interaction.

Reviewer: dulcesweet Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2008 11:19:38 AM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

another angsty chapter, :( please update soon.

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Date: 06/18/2008 11:19:38 AM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

another angsty chapter, :( please update soon.

Reviewer: irishekl Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2008 10:58:50 AM Title: True Love Will Find You In The End

YES! He is going home to her.

The scenes between Joe and Logan were wonderful.

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