I've lost a lot of people throughout my life and honey you've nailed it, the feeling of loss, the helplessness and the pain that just won't shift in your throat so you can *breathe*. Thanks for sharing this one honey, sometimes it's good to remember.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Joanne. This was the first story I ever wrote; I'd lost someone close to me very recently, and wanted to express those feelings in a story. Though it's sad, I'm glad it worked, and that it helped you remember in a good way. Thanks again for the feedback.