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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2013 2:18:57 PM Title: Inferiority Complex

Interesting premise, but if Marie 'gets' Logan like we all seem to think she does, as most of us see their relationship because she has him inside her head, then it's a little odd to think she wouldn't realize his need, his desire, his *requirement* to get out of the house and have that free, open, alone time. Good concept, and I liked the leaf-hair thing, but will admit, I needed the explanation at the end from you, the author.

Reviewer: nyzeair Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2012 1:15:42 PM Title: Inferiority Complex

NATURE?! Marie is jealous of the NATURE? Odd... but well done.

Reviewer: bored2pieces2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 12:18:44 AM Title: Inferiority Complex

I'm not even gonna lie, I didn't caatch it at first. I was like "wait, who the fuck is Nature? I don't remember her! What the hell is her power anyway, does she control plants?"

Well, there's my stupid moment for the day. How embarassing is that?!

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2008 10:54:36 AM Title: Inferiority Complex

I like the concept of this [the only comparison I struggled with was the strand of hair being a leaf.] Well done x

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