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Date: 11/05/2009 3:45:32 PM Title: Possibility
AAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!
*breath in* *breath out*
That utter and COMPLETE @$$HOLE!!! Does he ~think~ that categorizing it as a "pity fuck" could possibly help to lessen any of the pain he's putting Marie thru?? Does he really think it makes it any better for her to think that 'Ro just saved thousands of dollars of repairs to the Danger Room???
Men *can* be monumentally stupid, but this takes the cake! You're right Marie, he'll never know, and THAT should haunt his sorry butt for a good damn long time!!
Date: 04/24/2008 12:11:36 AM Title: Possibility
If this story made me think one thing it was this >> Logan's a jerk face!!! Grrr!!!
I think you did your characterizations really well. And even your internal dialogue is good, funny, accurate to the character, not overly 'flowery' or self pitying. It was good. And Logan is still a jerk face.
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2008 10:20:35 PM Title: Possibility
I completely agree with White Dove, you could definitely build on this to make a great companion piece or even a sequel.
Really great angst, not overly dramatic either but really real.
Awesome.
Date: 04/22/2008 4:25:48 PM Title: Possibility
Wowo that was painful. I could feel the emotions coming thru! Would love to see Logans point of view on that conversation. and maybe him trying to win Marie back.