The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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Nice, short piece, full of feeling, and he's so tired of running. Marie can return the favor by picking him up and taking him off the road this time. Very nice.
"How about I love you?"
Yeah, that's definitely more like it!!
The opening confused me - was she waiting at the motel? Was she with him? Did I miss something? And there were one or two misplaced words, like 'they're' in place of 'their', but otherwise this was great, and the ending really, really sewed it up for me! Marie is all grown up and taking no shit - and he 'fesses up to her. Loved that!