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Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 6:46:46 AM Title: Sometimes Things Break

I loved the basic concept of this story but i had one problem; ***"In the beginning, she had only been 20 years old"*** *** "She was then 52 years old and it was becoming more or less awkward for them to be affectionate"*** ??? It is commonly assumed that Logan looks around mid thirtys therefore at 20 there was perhaps a 15 year age gap and they had no problems yet you split them up when she was 52 with a 17 year age gap? because of this the middle part of this story didn't work for me but it was a lovely ending - the thought that although he managed to go on with his life he would never forget her.

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