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Reviewer: Lost2bfound Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2009 11:36:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have a pretty much love hate relationship with this story. I hate that Logan cheats on Marie and everything is all right between them. It just seems wrong.Are things really alright?.It does not seem that it goes into much depth of Marie's feelings. Like in nine months Logan cheated on her with Hank,it just infuriates me. But I cant seem to stop reading it. I just wished that Marie had a bigger part in these stories and for her to seem more important. I mean her power is awesome and could kick ass but it just seems that she does nothing which kinda sucks since she is my favorite character.

Anyway awesome stories kinda got me mad in some parts but I cant seem to get enough of it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback honey,I know Marie seems to get a back seat in these fics but the story arc is still going, her importance is still going to be felt as we get to the older years of Amber and what the coming war will do to their 'family'. I'm currently working on 'Las Vegas Angel' which is the next in the arc, but the point I think I've missed to make is that as much as Marie understands the workings of Logan her husband there's always a part of him he denies her. The darker part of him, the wild creature that could snap her spine if he wanted to, turn into Victor and when he was still working out his worth he needed Hank's help. He literally *was* two people and Marie understood that, which was why she told him when she had Amber he was *HERS* alone. The arc is continuing and Marie comes into what she is, a confident, capable woman who has a family to protect and nurture.rnrnThank you for reading and for taking the time to tell me how you feel about the stories, sometimes therapy has a human face and sometimes it has a muse to guide it. Thanks for taking the time and enjoying it, hugs Jo.

Reviewer: litlen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 1:41:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another all day reading marathon and yet again it was well worth it. I'm so in to this wonderful story that I skipped over to read rebirth before I read this one (just didn't seem right missing out a bit!) your imagination when writing this must have been off the scale (in a very good way) also notice that there's more but not finished (now you remember how NOT patient I am??). Nearly 365 thousand words – wouldn’t take long to write a few more!!!!!
Had a feeling that it was too easy for Hank and Logan to just call it a day especially after all that happened in the last one but did I miss where Marie found out about that particular romp?
Loving Lupa, intrigued by Amber - basically love the whole thing
I’ll stop rambling now!

Author's Response: Thanks hon, the arc was a huge one and it took a lot out of me to write it all. Las Vegas Angel is the next installment (as you probably know) and I'm getting round to finishing all the old fics I have half finished (including that one!).rnIn Lupa we get to see a little of the tension that Hanks past brings up and that actually makes Logan question their 'relationship'. To be betrayed is the biggest sin of all for Logan, to reveal himself (especially the way he has done in Nine Months) and to find out that his 'Family' (Lupa) had been under Hank's care when he was working in a lab....well it came to push and he needed to find out. Marie would *know* through the link they share, he could hide so much but it'd come out eventually and after the last time when she told him to always ne honest with her....well he'd have to eventually.rnrnGlad you like Amber, she's a little firecracker, just like her mum and Anne gets a good go in this one to as well as Katherine. Even though she had to pass before she fulfilled her role with Lupa.rnIt'll all come out in the end with Las Vegas Angel, the odd world they live in isn't exactly canon but it makes for interesting writing and reading. Glad you've enjoyed the ride so far and did you notice....365 (thousand) makes a year doesn't it LOL! Thanks for commenting hon and thanks for reading the Epic, it's appreciated, hugs Jo.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 7:30:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow that was an interesting concept. I have to say though I am disappointed. Logan cheated on Marie and more than once. that saddened me. I hate when men are unfaithful.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Lupa, it really doesn't fit that well in here but I added it because it's a story I love. The main story (of which Lupa is a piece in an arc) is over on XMFF, the sister site to this one. Glad you liked the concept of Logan's heritage it's possible if you think about it. The reasons for Logan's cheating are pretty big, not everyone would understand but if he hadn't he could have lost everything. Thanks foe the feedback, Jo.

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