The Wolverine & Rogue Fanfiction Archive
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ohhh more more more!!
I really hope you haven't forgotten about this story. I want to read more! Please update this wonderful story! Please?
This is good. I want more. Much more. Soon. Pleeease?
Oh dear, I didn't like this one..
The fight description was too long only to turn out to be a dange room sequence! Not happy :(
Also, the conversation between Logan and Rogue seemed rather OOC, including the part where Logan doesn't even notice Rogue is hurt because he's too busy asking inane questions.
Then you have a line like:
"I look back at Logan as we beginning to go greet the Professor and I know from his look that this conversation is far from over."
and next thing Logan is leaving the mansion and the conversation was never continued, so it obviously *was* over.