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Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2009 3:28:24 AM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

ohhh more more more!!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 2:13:32 AM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

I really hope you haven't forgotten about this story. I want to read more! Please update this wonderful story! Please?

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 12:55:07 PM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

This is good. I want more. Much more. Soon. Pleeease?

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 1:10:17 PM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

Oh dear, I didn't like this one..

The fight description was too long only to turn out to be a dange room sequence! Not happy :(

Also, the conversation between Logan and Rogue seemed rather OOC, including the part where Logan doesn't even notice Rogue is hurt because he's too busy asking inane questions.

Then you have a line like:
"I look back at Logan as we beginning to go greet the Professor and I know from his look that this conversation is far from over."
and next thing Logan is leaving the mansion and the conversation was never continued, so it obviously *was* over.

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