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Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 12:05:23 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Reunion of Sorts

I really like this story. You might want to g over it for spelling. I noticed you wrote Slime instead of Slim. Two very different things. LOL

Author's Response: humm....thank you. I'll have to talk to my beta reader. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Kielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 5:46:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Reunion of Sorts

Utterly addicted to this story - bring on the next chapter!

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