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Reviewer: velvetemr73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2011 7:00:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: Accidental Truth

wow, that was good.

Reviewer: rogue91 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2009 3:28:24 AM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

ohhh more more more!!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 2:13:32 AM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

I really hope you haven't forgotten about this story. I want to read more! Please update this wonderful story! Please?

Reviewer: Anami Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 12:55:07 PM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

This is good. I want more. Much more. Soon. Pleeease?

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 1:10:17 PM Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget

Oh dear, I didn't like this one..

The fight description was too long only to turn out to be a dange room sequence! Not happy :(

Also, the conversation between Logan and Rogue seemed rather OOC, including the part where Logan doesn't even notice Rogue is hurt because he's too busy asking inane questions.

Then you have a line like:
"I look back at Logan as we beginning to go greet the Professor and I know from his look that this conversation is far from over."
and next thing Logan is leaving the mansion and the conversation was never continued, so it obviously *was* over.

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 11:02:56 AM Title: Chapter 14: Remember Me

A bit too much transcription from the movie in this one, but at least we got Logan getting his memories back at the end. I wonder what he thinks Rogue lied to him about / is still lying to him about..

Reviewer: August Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2009 8:01:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: The Machine

That wasn't so bad as you think.
I thought the scene with Victor and Mystique ended a bit suddenly though, hard to believe that Victor wouldn't say anything else / make a scene after finding out that Mystique hid a son from him but would just get on with the mission in silence.
I like the shortcuts you took so you could get the story moving along, can't wait to read what happens next and when Logan starts to remember..

Reviewer: Laroka Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 6:32:50 AM Title: Chapter 13: The Machine

I like this chapter:) and I like your Rogue. Can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: Laroka Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 2:10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: A Train Story

I really like your story:) hope to see more soon...

Author's Response: why thank you very much! :D

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2009 1:08:26 PM Title: Chapter 12: A Train Story

yay an update!!! thank you so much!!! I love this story! I feel so bad for rogue ion all this! Please let let Logan remember some of the past? Please! It hurts my heart to have him not remember!

Author's Response: Thank you, I felt so bad not updating sooner. But I just hated everything I wrote down and of course I lost my outline for the story lol. This isn't even close to what I orignially wrote either. But I plan for Logan to start remembering come next chapter. Right after Rogue is saved from Liberty Island but before he leaves to go find himself. Also, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: lilmizz3vil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2008 4:07:13 PM Title: Chapter 10: Accidental Truth

I love kitty and peter, not as much as logan and marie. All this story needs is evil Jean. I love it when shes evil, she so easy to hate. Then Scott and Storm can "get it on"

Author's Response: i love making jean evil. don't understand why i hate her so much but usually in almost everyone of my stories she's the villain lol. but i don't know if she will be the major evil in this one. obviously i will have her try and you know take over the world as most villain's do, but she won't be the big villain of this story. oh and thank you ever so much for your review!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2008 12:26:35 PM Title: Chapter 10: Accidental Truth

awww! *Sniffle* this is so sad! I loved where Rogue took control of the junior team. But Logan's amnesia is just so heartbreaking!

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Shuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2008 11:52:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Prologue

Love this and have followed it for ages.cant wait for more soon. how long till he realises rogue knows something... or crushes her when he gos for Jean!

Reviewer: LoganRogueRokz Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 2:43:49 AM Title: Chapter 8: Deception Made Easy

Please update?

I want more!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 6:33:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Repeat and Rescue

Love it, Love it, Love it! I think this it definitely better than the other version, (not that i didn't like that one too!) but the inital meeting and then her getting shot is more intense. Just please don't leave us hanging like you did last time. anyway. I am very anxious for the next chapter! Write fast and often and plase update soon!!

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long... I was house sitting and didn't have my computer so I couldn't update the next chapter! The next chapter will be up either tomorrow of the following day promise!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 12:05:23 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Reunion of Sorts

I really like this story. You might want to g over it for spelling. I noticed you wrote Slime instead of Slim. Two very different things. LOL

Author's Response: humm....thank you. I'll have to talk to my beta reader. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Kielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 5:46:01 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Reunion of Sorts

Utterly addicted to this story - bring on the next chapter!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 12:08:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: And This Is How We Say Goodbye

That was so bittesweet. Loving and caring yet very sad. i love this story so far.

Reviewer: Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 11:37:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Prologue

This is a great story and I hope Logan finds Marie....can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dita Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 10:49:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Caged Hearts

Well you've got me interested. And I do want to see where the plot is heading.

Although I have to admit, 15 vs. like 85 is really pushing my ick-factor age boundaries lol.

Author's Response: I had to do it that way so she isn't super old when I skip a couple of years. I want to keep her as young as possible for as long as possible. Trust me the age factor creeps me out a little here. But in further chapters you won't notice it as much.

Reviewer: Gaia Moore Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 10:16:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Prologue

Looks promising.
Can hardly wait for the next few chapters.

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