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Reviewer: Kyrada Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 10:11:06 PM Title: Prologue: I need you to come get me

Well if it's going to have a really bad ending,hmmm it has to be worth it.Cuz if you don't i may want to stab you lol! just kidding.
Well, since rogue was captured you could make that a little bit more dramatic, if they are gonna rescue her, it got to have more action into it.
And about the bad ending IF it's gonna be something about death make sound sad and painfull, and like that you make the readers imagination go sad and crazy and thats awsome!!! ;)

Author's Response: No one's going to die... yet. At least not in the next installment. She will be saved, but it's not pretty when Logan finds her. There will be a third installment that with tie everything up, and I think that there will have to be a few deaths in that one.

Reviewer: Kyrada Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 7:33:13 PM Title: Prologue: I need you to come get me

Keep up with your story, Epic.I loved it, perfect beggining and perfect ending. The way Rogue and Logan are beggining they romatic relation... it's pretty good and you are good too. So do hte next part at least for me... please.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. I really apprieciate it. I am working on part two right now, but I don't think that it's going the way I want. I think it's going to have a really bad ending. But everthing will come back together at the end of the final part.rnrnIf you have any ideas, let me know!

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