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[Report This]Date: 10/09/2009 10:40:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: I haven’t stopped loving you….
i love this more mature and cold Rogue.
and bobby is such a little bitch LOL! he totally deserved that. i almost feel sorry for kitty...almost.
Date: 09/18/2009 12:55:13 AM Title: Chapter 6: I haven’t stopped loving you….
Don't get me wrong. I'm enjoying the hell out of your story. But your Rogue is more than a little hypocritical, love. She screams and berates Kitty for being her friend and being with Bobby while they were together. (You even implied that they didn't really get together until shortly after the breakup.) But Rogue actually slept with Bobby's best friend, frequently, while they were still together? Where does she have the right to go casting stones, huh? Especially at little Kitty when she was trying to apologise. You got balls, love. That, however, is my only complaint. Really. I'm enjoying it thus far.
~Mia
Author's Response: thanks for the review. That's actually how I wanted to be her in this one. A bitch no none of her friends really saw. I used to know a lot of girls like this (I hope I never was, though) and that's where the idea actually came from. You know, those girls you went to high school with who had everything and when you bump into them five years after graduation, they still have it all and are still as bitchy. She's vengeful and confused and fucked up on top of everything else. Basically, even with everything she has gone through, she's still very spoiled. I tried to make my Rogue's a little different in each story, so their not all built with these double standards. In this one, I didn't want her to be nice from the beginning. She's very hypocritical. You'll read more about it later if you haven't gotten too the next story. It's not really discussed or writen about, more subtal. I hope you enjoy the rest!
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2008 10:11:06 PM Title: Prologue: I need you to come get me
Well if it's going to have a really bad ending,hmmm it has to be worth it.Cuz if you don't i may want to stab you lol! just kidding.
Well, since rogue was captured you could make that a little bit more dramatic, if they are gonna rescue her, it got to have more action into it.
And about the bad ending IF it's gonna be something about death make sound sad and painfull, and like that you make the readers imagination go sad and crazy and thats awsome!!! ;)
Author's Response: No one's going to die... yet. At least not in the next installment. She will be saved, but it's not pretty when Logan finds her. There will be a third installment that with tie everything up, and I think that there will have to be a few deaths in that one.
[Report This]Date: 03/11/2008 7:33:13 PM Title: Prologue: I need you to come get me
Keep up with your story, Epic.I loved it, perfect beggining and perfect ending. The way Rogue and Logan are beggining they romatic relation... it's pretty good and you are good too. So do hte next part at least for me... please.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. I really apprieciate it. I am working on part two right now, but I don't think that it's going the way I want. I think it's going to have a really bad ending. But everthing will come back together at the end of the final part.rnrnIf you have any ideas, let me know!